Friday, 27 November 2015

Proverbs 2

It was only 97% done [so incomplete even though there is a prior post!], so I dusted it off.

As I asked before, where do the sentences begin and end?  This is poetry - so syllable counts are back in the fourth column. Just look at how regular it is even if you can't make sense of it. And there is a recurrence pattern from verses 7 to the end (see below). And there are 22 verses - is there an alphabetic pattern to observe?

Proverbs 2 Fn Min Max Syll
בְּ֭נִי אִם־תִּקַּ֣ח אֲמָרָ֑י
וּ֝מִצְוֺתַ֗י תִּצְפֹּ֥ן אִתָּֽךְ
1 g My child, if you take my promises,
and my commandments you treasure with you,
3e 4B 8
8
לְהַקְשִׁ֣יב לַֽחָכְמָ֣ה אָזְנֶ֑ךָ
תַּטֶּ֥ה לִ֝בְּךָ֗ לַתְּבוּנָֽה
2 to pay attention in shrewdness with your ear,
(stretch out your heart to discernment!)
3e 4B 9
7
כִּ֤י אִ֣ם לַבִּינָ֣ה תִקְרָ֑א
לַ֝תְּבוּנָ֗ה תִּתֵּ֥ן קוֹלֶֽךָ
3 C for if to discernment you call,
(to discernment give your voice!)
3e 4C 7
8
אִם־תְּבַקְשֶׁ֥נָּה כַכָּ֑סֶף
וְֽכַמַּטְמוֹנִ֥ים תַּחְפְּשֶֽׂנָּה
4 if you seek her as silver,
and as if buried, you investigate her,
3e 4A 8
9
אָ֗ז תָּ֭בִין יִרְאַ֣ת יְהוָ֑ה
וְדַ֖עַת אֱלֹהִ֣ים תִּמְצָֽא
5 ~ then you will discern the fear of Yahweh,
and knowledge of God, you will find.
3e 4B 7
8
כִּֽי־יְ֭הוָה יִתֵּ֣ן חָכְמָ֑ה
מִ֝פִּ֗יו דַּ֣עַת וּתְבוּנָֽה
6 For Yahweh gives shrewdness.
From his mouth is knowledge and discernment.
3e 4B 8
7
יִצְפֹּ֣ן לַ֭יְשָׁרִים תּוּשִׁיָּ֑ה
מָ֝גֵ֗ן לְהֹ֣לְכֵי תֹֽם
7 He treasures for the upright, enterprise,
a shield to those who walk complete.
3e 4B 8
6
לִ֭נְצֹר אָרְח֣וֹת מִשְׁפָּ֑ט
וְדֶ֖רֶךְ חֲסִידָ֣יו יִשְׁמֹֽר
8 g The paths of judgment to preserve,
and the way of those who are under his mercy he will keep.
3e 4B 6
8
אָ֗ז תָּ֭בִין צֶ֣דֶק וּמִשְׁפָּ֑ט
וּ֝מֵישָׁרִ֗ים כָּל־מַעְגַּל־טֽוֹב
9 ~ Then you will discern righteousness and judgment,
and uprightness, all from a good track.
3e 4B 8
8
כִּֽי־תָב֣וֹא חָכְמָ֣ה בְלִבֶּ֑ךָ
וְ֝דַ֗עַת לְֽנַפְשְׁךָ֥ יִנְעָֽם
10 For shrewdness comes from your heart,
and knowledge to your being is a pleasure.
3e 4B 8
9
מְ֭זִמָּה תִּשְׁמֹ֥ר עָלֶ֗יךָ תְּבוּנָ֥ה תִנְצְרֶֽכָּה 11 g Intention will guard beside you and discernment will preserve you, 3e 3g 15
לְ֭הַצִּ֣ילְךָ מִדֶּ֣רֶךְ רָ֑ע
מֵ֝אִ֗ישׁ מְדַבֵּ֥ר תַּהְפֻּכֽוֹת
12 g to deliver you from the way of evil,
from a person speaking changeable things.
3e 4B 8
8
הַ֭עֹ֣זְבִים אָרְח֣וֹת יֹ֑שֶׁר
לָ֝לֶ֗כֶת בְּדַרְכֵי־חֹֽשֶׁךְ
13 g (Those who forsake the paths of the upright,
to walk in the ways of darkness,
3e 4B 7
7
הַ֭שְּׂמֵחִים לַעֲשׂ֥וֹת רָ֑ע
יָ֝גִ֗ילוּ בְּֽתַהְפֻּכ֥וֹת רָֽע
14 g who are glad to do evil,
they rejoice in the waywardness of evil,
3e 4A 7
8
אֲשֶׁ֣ר אָרְחֹתֵיהֶ֣ם עִקְּשִׁ֑ים
וּ֝נְלוֹזִ֗ים בְּמַעְגְּלוֹתָֽם
15 whose paths are devious,
and they are refractory in their tracks.)
3e 4B 8
8
לְ֭הַצִּ֣ילְךָ מֵאִשָּׁ֣ה זָרָ֑ה
מִ֝נָּכְרִיָּ֗ה אֲמָרֶ֥יהָ הֶחֱלִֽיקָה
16 g to deliver you from a sifting woman,
from the unrecognizable, her promises smooth,
3e 4B 9
12
הַ֭עֹזֶבֶת אַלּ֣וּף נְעוּרֶ֑יהָ
וְאֶת־בְּרִ֖ית אֱלֹהֶ֣יהָ שָׁכֵֽחָה
17 g she forsakes the captain of her youth,
and the covenant with her God forgets.
3e 4B 10
11
כִּ֤י שָׁ֣חָה אֶל־מָ֣וֶת בֵּיתָ֑הּ
וְאֶל־רְ֝פָאִ֗ים מַעְגְּלֹתֶֽיהָ
18 C For prostrated to death is her house,
and to the shades her tracks.
3e 4C 8
10
כָּל־בָּ֭אֶיהָ לֹ֣א יְשׁוּב֑וּן
וְלֹֽא־יַ֝שִּׂ֗יגוּ אָרְח֥וֹת חַיִּֽים
19 All who come to her do not return,
and they do not overtake the paths of life,
3e 4B 8
8
לְמַ֗עַן תֵּ֭לֵךְ בְּדֶ֣רֶךְ טוֹבִ֑ים
וְאָרְח֖וֹת צַדִּיקִ֣ים תִּשְׁמֹֽר
20 in order that you may walk in the way of goodness,
and the paths of the righteous you keep.
3e 4B 10
8
כִּֽי־יְשָׁרִ֥ים יִשְׁכְּנוּ אָ֑רֶץ
וּ֝תְמִימִ֗ים יִוָּ֥תְרוּ בָֽהּ
21 For the upright will dwell on earth,
and the complete will remain in her.
3e 4A 9
7
וּ֭רְשָׁעִים מֵאֶ֣רֶץ יִכָּרֵ֑תוּ
וּ֝בוֹגְדִ֗ים יִסְּח֥וּ מִמֶּֽנָּה פ
22 g But the wicked from earth will be cut off,
and the treacherous will be extirpated from her. P
3e 4B 10
9

לישׁרים for the upright
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7ישׁר
להלכי to those who walk
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7הלך
תם complete
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7תמם
לנצר to preserve
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8נצר
ארחות the paths of
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8ארח
משׁפט judgment
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8שׁפט
ודרך and the way of
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8דרך
ישׁמר he will keep
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8שׁמר
תבין you will discern
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9בין
ומשׁפט and judgment
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9שׁפט
ומישׁרים and uprightness
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9ישׁר
כל all
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9כל
מעגל from a track
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9עגל
טוב good
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9טוב
תשׁמר will guard
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11שׁמר
תבונה discernment
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11בין
תנצרכה will preserve you
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11נצר
להצילך to deliver you
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12נצל
מדרך from the way of
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12דרך
רע evil
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12רעע
תהפכות changeable things
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12הפך
העזבים those who forsake
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13עזב
ארחות the paths of
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13ארח
ישׁר the upright
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13ישׁר
ללכת to walk
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13הלך
בדרכי of the ways of
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13דרך
רע evil
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14רעע
בתהפכות in the waywardness of
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14הפך
רע evil
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14רעע
ארחתיהם paths
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15ארח
במעגלותם in their tracks
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15עגל
להצילך to deliver you
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16נצל
העזבת she forsakes
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17עזב
מעגלתיה her tracks
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18עגל
כל all
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19כל
ארחות the paths of
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19ארח
תלך you may walk
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20הלך
בדרך in the way of
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20דרך
טובים goodness
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20טוב
וארחות and the paths of
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20ארח
תשׁמר you keep
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20שׁמר
ישׁרים the upright
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21ישׁר
ארץ earth
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21ארץ
ותמימים and the complete
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21תמם
מארץ from earth
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22ארץ
Interesting focus - forsaking earth (or the land). Note the frame of upright and complete.

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