I have been learning Hebrew by translating Tanach these past 20 years. What have I learned? It's always a stretch to really answer a question like this. Sometime ago, perhaps a week or a few days ago -- I forgot to look at the date, I selected Psalm 11 for a demonstration of a book idea I did not pursue -- to much at once! So I put this chapter below.
I think we can and must take the world as it is, a serious decision about what is good. And variety and trouble are part of that good. As the spiritual goes -- nobody knows de trouble a've seen... I notice that the musical contour is the same for Genesis 1:1a as it is for Verses in the story of Cain -- what have you done! And the contour is an inclusio for the deluge -- as you can discover.
The Hebrew Bible is an act of love, by humans for humans in a Spirit of
Persistence of Love, a Holiness to be sought, and a Forming of Communities of
Love in truth and kindness and faithfulness.
Let's put that visually --
and set it apart against this random psalm.
Psalms 11
Syllables: 150. Words: 68. Roots: 52. Root Recurrence: 38%. Average per verse: 3.7.
Psalms 11: Syllables: 154; Longest recitation: 10; Tenor: f# 25.32%;
Ornament density: 15.6%; Average phrase length: 9.1.
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1 For the leader. Of David. In Yahweh I take refuge. How do you say to me, Flit away to your mountain, bird? (1-2-4-1) |
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א למנצ֗ח לד֫ו֥ד בֽיהו֨ה ׀ חס֗יתי א֭יך תאמר֣ו לנפש֑י נ֝֗ודי הרכ֥ם צפֽור |
7 11 6 |
a lmnxk ldvid bihvh ksiti aiç tamru lnpwi nudi hrcm xipor |
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2 ♪C For behold: the wicked. They direct
a bow. They prepare their arrows on the bow-string, to shoot in gloom at the upright of heart. (C-4-1) |
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ב כ֤י הנ֪ה הרשע֡ים ידרכ֬ון ק֗שת כוננ֣ו חצ֣ם על־י֑תר ליר֥ות במו־א֝֗פל לישרי־לֽב |
18 9 |
b ci hnh hrwyim idrcun qwt connu kixm
yl-itr lirot bmo-aopl liwri-lb |
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3 ♪B For the fundamentals are
overthrown. How does a righteous one work? (B-4-1) |
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| ג כ֣י ה֭שתות יֽהרס֑ון צ֝ד֗יק מה־פעֽל |
8 5 |
g ci hwtot iihrsun xdiq mh-pyl |
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4 Yahweh is in his holy temple. Yahweh
in the heavens his throne. His eyes gaze on, His eyelids test the children of humanity. (1-2-4-1) |
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ד יהו֤ה ׀ בֽה֘יכ֤ל קדש֗ו יהוה֮ בשמ֪ים כ֫סא֥ו עינ֥יו יחז֑ו עפעפ֥יו י֝בחנ֗ו בנ֣י אדֽם |
14 5 10 |
d ihvh bhicl qodwo ihvh bwmiim cisao
yiniv ikzu ypypiv ibknu bni adm |
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5 Yahweh will test a righteous one, but the wicked and lover of violence ... he hates. (1-2-4-1) |
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ה יהוה֮ צד֪יק י֫בח֥ן ו֭רשע ואה֣ב חמ֑ס שֽנא֥ה נפשֽו |
6 8 4 |
h ihvh xdiq ibkn vrwy vaohb kms wnah npwo |
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6 He rains snares on the wicked. Fire and pitch and ferocious wind are the portion of their cup. (1-2-1) |
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ו ימט֥ר על־רשע֗ים פ֫ח֥ים א֣ש ו֭גפרית ור֥וח זלעפ֗ות מנ֣ת כוסֽם |
8 14 |
v imTr yl-rwyim pkim aw vgoprit vruk zlypot mnt cosm |
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7 For Yahweh is a righteous one. He
loves righteousness. His faces gaze on the upright. (1-4-1) |
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ז כֽי־צד֣יק י֭הוה צדק֣ות אה֑ב י֝ש֗ר יחז֥ו פנֽימו |
9 8 |
z ci-xdiq ihvh xdqot ahb iwr ikzu pnimo |
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flit away, (nvd) wander aimlessly, even sounds like English nod, flit
off is too rude for me though the sense may be that rude. your mountain, (hr) or hill. Your is plural, mountain is a metonym for God. I have used both mountain and hill for this word. |
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fundamentals, (wit) to set. The form of the word is rare, used here
and in Isaiah 19:10, but the underlying root is very common. work, (pyl) not the word for do or make. |
| 4 | Does this one have eyelids (ypyp)? This word is rare in the Bible. It is used in Job three times. Taken together with Leviathan, it forms part of the framework of Job (with a touch of humour). It appears twice in the Psalter, here and in Psalm 132 where David says he will not let his eyelids slumber until he builds a house for his Lord. Elsewhere in the Bible, it occurs five more times, including one seductive fluttering in Proverbs 6. |
| 5 | he hates, lit. hates his being, or hates himself. Most translations consider the wicked as the object of hate belonging to Yahweh. |
| 6 | [Matthew 5:45] |
| 7 | gaze, third person plural agreeing with faces as subject. |
| Word / Gloss | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | Vs | Stem |
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לישרי at the upright of
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2 | ישר | |||||
יחזו gaze on |
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4 | חזה | |||||
יבחנו test |
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4 | בחן | |||||
יבחן will test |
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5 | בחן | |||||
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ואהב and lover of
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5 | אהב | |||||
אהב he loves |
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7 | אהב | |||||
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ישר the upright
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7 | ישר | |||||
יחזו gaze on |
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7 | חזה |
