Sunday, 28 July 2013

Today's Psalm 85

It's pretty hard to beat today's psalm for beauty. For the sake of example, I have removed several recurring words. The result shows a different poetic strategy to the circular patterns observable in other psalms. Here we have a progressive and climax seeking pattern. It may even be reinforced by some of the words I removed. But what is left shows a progression of recurrence (and there are clearly some circles as well evident from the table). The focus keeps moving forward as the poem is written from land, to people, to salvation, to kindness, to peace, to truth, to righteousness.  Verse 11 is hard to forget.
חֶסֶד וֶאֱמֶת נִפְגָּשׁוּ
צֶדֶק וְשָׁלוֹם נָשָׁקוּ
....Kindness and truth have met together
righteousness and peace have kissed each other

Selected recurring words
Word and gloss * first usage123456789VsRoot
ארצך with your land
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2ארץ
שׁבת you turned
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2שׁוב
עמך your people
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3עם
השׁיבות you have turned
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4שׁוב
שׁובנו turn us
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5שׁוב
ישׁענו our salvation
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5ישׁע
עמנו with us
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5עם
תשׁוב you turn
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7שׁוב
ועמך so your people
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7עם
חסדך your kindness
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8חסד
וישׁעך and your salvation
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8ישׁע
תתן give
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8נתן
שׁלום peace
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9שׁלם
עמו his people
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9עם
ישׁובו let them turn
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9שׁוב
ישׁעו his salvation
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10ישׁע
בארצנו in our land
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10ארץ
חסד kindness
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11חסד
ואמת and truth
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11אמת
צדק righteousness
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11צדק
ושׁלום and peace
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11שׁלם
אמת truth
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12אמת
מארץ from earth
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12ארץ
וצדק and righteousness
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12צדק
יתן gives
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13נתן
וארצנו and our land
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13ארץ
תתן gives
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13נתן
צדק righteousness
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14צדק


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