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Wednesday, 10 August 2011

On translating acrostics

A question came to me on email.
Examining your translations of the acrostic chapters of Lamentations, and comparing them with other Bible translations also preserving the acrostic structure, I noticed that your translation - like the Hebrew, but unlike some of the other acrostic translations - shows a reversal of the normal order of I (ayin) and P (peh) in the chapters 2, 3 and 4 into P-I, compared to chapter 1. I was just curious to know more about your choice to have this reversal be apparent in English.
Question 1 - what is the normal order of the letters in Hebrew?
Here it is from the banner of this blog: א ב ג ד ה ו ז ח ט י כ ל מ נ ס ע פ צ ק ר ש ת

It is clear from comparing the Psalter's acrostics with Lamentations that the order of the letters in the 8 acrostics of the Psalter is the same as that given above and the same as  the order in chapter 1 of Lamentations. Then, as the question states: chapters 2, 3, and 4 reverse the order of the letters ע and פ.

I raise this question of sequence to put to rest the idea that there might have been a different letter sequence at some period in history. It's a possibility, but I would not support it with the evidence I have: 9 examples in the above sequence and 3 with 2 letters reversed.

Question 2 - why translate the acrostics with the letter order evident?
The acrostics are games. To translate a game, one must play the game. In every sequential move of this game, the poet writes to God.  The game is with God. Games have rules and also may have a winner. Or they are shared play. These are word games, and can be played by children and adults. Three weeks ago at Sunday school, an 8 year old and I read through Psalm 34. We began with his having to find each of the letters of the alef-bet in their poetic place.  He had learned his letters the previous week.  He eventually figured out the regular pattern in the poem (with its missing or premature positioning of vav).  The game is for teaching and learning.

Question 3 - why make the patterns clear in English?
The poems are foreign and strange to our ears. Making them read smoothly would betray their reality.

The questions then arise - why did the poet reverse the sequence of these letters?  Similarly, why are the first four acrostics in the Psalter (all in book 1) imperfect - missing one or more letters, and the last four (all in book 5) perfect, complete in their sequential representation of each letter where expected?  Similarly, why is chapter 3 of Lamentations a triple acrostic in the first person singular?

To be known is to be known in these questions. Beware the too easy answer. As Northrope Frye writes in The Great Code, (quoting roughly from memory)  the answer to a question consolidates learning at the level of the question and thus prevents the formation of fuller and better questions.  (I would omit the word 'better' - but by all means, let us have good questions, and let us not have our learning of answers become the rote that we measure by. Spirit and Life are more than rote.)

My Lamentations translations are here Chapters 1 2 3 4 5. I have not (yet) submitted them to the discipline I have been developing in the last year.

I am on holiday and will have limited access to the web over the next two weeks.

Saturday, 25 September 2010

Psalm 145 - the missing nun

No this is not Midsomer Murders. Way back in 2006 I did a diagram on this psalm that supplied the missing nun according to Rabbinic tradition - it is Amos 5:2 and it reads this way in the Hebrew
נָֽפְלָה לֹֽא־תֹוסִיף קוּם
 בְּתוּלַת יִשְׂרָאֵל
 נִטְּשָׁה עַל־אַדְמָתָהּ
אֵין מְקִימָֽהּ
in Hebrew word order - line by line
fallen no more to rise
is the virgin Israel
cast off on her own ground
there is no one to raise her up

Why such a tradition? It is more than a nun verse. It fits a tragic situation and it fits the thought of psalm 145 in a way that anticipates two words in the next verse
סוֹמֵךְ יְהוָה לְכָל-הַנֹּפְלִים
וְזוֹקֵף לְכָל-הַכְּפוּפִים
14svomék yy lkal-hànoplym
vzvoqéph lkal-hàkpvupym
Sustains יְהוָה all the fallen
and he raises up all the distressed
It also easily fits the Nun in Hebrew and in English
No more to rise, fallen is the virgin Israel
cast off on her own ground, there is no one to raise her up
Notice also the poetic recurrence of rise/raise (קום) in the Amos verse.

There are 8 acrostics in the psalter. They are placed only in Books 1 and 5, forming a frame for the whole Psalter.  Several of the acrostics are incomplete. As explained here by Ronald Benun, the acrostics are incomplete except for psalms 111, 112, and 119. So it must be that the king of psalm 110 that is praised in the two following Hallels and the one who observes the testimony as celebrated in psalm 119 are complete. All others are in a struggle to be complete. Should psalm 145 have a missing letter or should it be complete? And if it is to be complete, what would the nature of the missing verse have to be to convince us that it belonged?

The above paper does not deal with Psalm 145 so it cannot enter into the discussion of completeness according to his method - a very complex method. If one was to read the people like Fokkelman whom I read in the early days before I could count syllables, then the missing verse would have to fit the poetic line at a syllable and word count. (Dr. C.J. Labuschagne has a remarkable detailed numeric reconstruction here.) To take a simple example, if one was adding a missing line to an English acrostic in iambic pentameter, one would expect the missing line to have 10 syllables. One would likely also expect that it would have some relation to the text and probably not a negative one in this psalm of praise.  It would be appropriate if the last book of the psalms had 4 perfect acrostics to balance the four imperfect ones in book 1.  It might suggest that the psalter is a road to perfection.

I would also expect some word patterns and content that fit and that was not just a copy of another verse beginning with nun. Well - all these questions and the verse has been around for a long time - but with MS support from the Septuagint and a few very late Hebrew manuscripts - but not the Masoretic text. And now it is also found in one of the Hebrew scrolls in Qumran (only 1 out of 37 - but maybe psalm 145 is only in one of the scrolls because they are all in fragments. A scroll is determined as distinct by different writing / medium and date. None of the psalms scrolls is complete.) The verse is in the RSV and the Septuagint - the Greek translation of the psalms from the second or third century BCE. So it has even been available by back-translation from the Greek.
נאמן יְהוָה בדבריו וחסיד בכול מעשיו
Transcribed - n)mn יְהוָה bdbryv vxsyd bkvl m`syv
I am really bad at how to put dots and stuff in the text - but maybe this is how it would sound
ne-eman adonai bedvarav vachasid bekol me-asav
In English this is
faithful is יְהוָה in his words and merciful in all his deeds
It is my impression that in this Davidic psalm in the Yahwist not the Elohist part of the Psalter, that the name of God should match what the LXX seems to imply: that the tetragrammeton was used here, not Elohim. There are a few notes on the web and the note we were given in the conference session has the following: נאמן אלוהים בדבריו וחסיד בכול מעשיו but no decision has been yet made for the Oxford Hebrew Bible. I am glad to see that Dr. C.J. Labuschagne also chose the name rather than the word for God.

As a note on signing and controlling translations - perhaps all acrostics should be marked with their letters so that the verses do not get lost. Just think if the Greeks had done a little letter-play the way the Countes of Pembroke did in the 16th century.

Friday, 30 April 2021

Psalms 11

When we were doing the psalms in sequence, (in March) we got to the first acrostic, Psalms 9-10. The next set is Psalms 11-25, then 26-34, then 35-37. Each of the last psalms in the series (bolded) is an acrostic. Will it make sense to see these as being like chapters in the first book of the Psalter, Psalms 1-41? Each of the four acrostics in book 1 is broken. One or more letters are missing. Psalms 9-10 is treated as a single psalm in the Greek and Orthodox and Latin translations. Two psalms are trying to make up one broken acrostic.

The fifth book, Psalms 107-150 (using Hebrew numbering - as is used by most English versions) similarly has 4 acrostic poems. They are all perfect. Looking at sequences leading up to acrostics gives us Psalms 106-111-112, (two acrostics in a row here) 113-119, (one enormous acrostic). Then come the psalms of ascent and three psalms following (120-134, 135, 136, 137 - no acrostics here), finally the fourth acrostic comes at the end a series of Davidic psalms, 138-145, and then the final 5, the doxology for the whole Psalter. 

We are still at the beginning, but there is some discernible structure to this collection.

These are poems full of violence. The poet takes refuge in Yahweh, in the one who was, who is, and who is to come. Confidence grows. Tension is high.

Are the fundamentals overthrown today? No preparation for the pandemic, profit before people in long term care, but the economy! balance the books, open up in the name of freedom (at whose expense?), essential workers at minimum wage, undocumented workers escaping from violent governance, and we haven't even looked at the Near East and the utter destruction there. How does a righteous one, (i.e. Yahweh) work in this disordered environment?

thlim ia Psalms 11 Fn Min Max Syll
a lmnxk ldvid
bihvh ksiti aiç tamru lnpwi
nudi hrcm xipor
1 For the leader. Of David.
In Yahweh I take refuge. How do you say to me,
Flit away to your mountain, bird?
3e 4B 7
11
6
b ci hnh hrwyim idrcun qwt connu kixm yl-itr
lirot bmo-aopl liwri-lb
2 For behold: the wicked. They direct a bow. They prepare their arrows on the bow-string,
to shoot in gloom at the upright of heart.
C 3d 4C 18
9
g ci hwtot iihrsun
xdiq mh-pyl
3 For the fundamentals are overthrown.
How does a righteous one work?

B 3e 4B 8
5
d ihvh bhicl qodwo ihvh bwmiim cisao
yiniv ikzu
ypypiv ibknu bni adm
4 Yahweh is in his holy temple. Yahweh in the heavens his throne.
His eyes gaze on,
His eyelids test the children of humanity.
3d 4C 14
5
10
h ihvh xdiq ibkn
vrwy vaohb kms
wnah npwo
5 Yahweh will test a righteous one,
but the wicked and lover of violence ...
he hates.

3d 4B 6
8
4
v im'tr yl-rwyim pkim
aw vgoprit vruk zlypot mnt cosm
6 He rains snares on the wicked.
Fire and pitch and ferocious wind are the portion of their cup.
3e 4B 8
14
z ci-xdiq ihvh xdqot ahb
iwr ikzu pnimo
7 For Yahweh is a righteous one. He loves righteousness.
His faces gaze on the upright.
3e 4B 9
8

You can observe from the syllable counts that there are 3 tricola, and 4 bicola. And the music is below. (No available performance as yet.) Take the trouble to sing it - if you only know English, remember it is plainsong, sing the syllables in Hebrew, and read the English line by line. It's only the first page in the chapter. Let's see where it takes us.

 

Saturday, 30 May 2020

Psalm 145, the missing nun

How would you know that a verse was missing from a poem? If you knew it was an English sonnet then you would expect 14 lines and if there were only 13, you would infer that something was missing.

There are some poems in the Bible that tell you there are lines missing. Then the question is, was it deliberate? Did the poet want to make a point about 13 line sonnets?

Lots of people have taken up the problem of the missing nun in Psalm 145. Many English readers may not know that this is a special form of poem, an alphabetic acrostic. Each line or set of lines in an acrostic begins with a letter of the alphabet in its sequence.

This alone is interesting. These ancient poets were aware of the game, and of their 22 letters, and they show this awareness in 13 poems in the Hebrew Bible. (Maybe this holy sonnet is missing something? Joke.)

The thirteen acrostics are: 4 in the first book of the Psalms, 4 in the last book of the Psalms, 4 in the Lamentations of Jeremiah, and one in the Proverbs.

Only 5 of these are complete. The 4 in the first book of the Psalms are, without exception, missing several letters. Of the 4 in the last book of the Psalms, only one, Psalm 145, is missing a letter.
Curiously, the 4 in the Lamentations are complete except that Peh and Ayin are in reverse order. Proverbs 31 is complete.

The acrostics form a circular structure based on the psalm preceding each - 4 acrostics over 5 psalms in book 1, and 4 acrostics over 3 psalms in book 5. It is a complex structure.  I have an image here.

Chapterabgdhvzk+iclmnsypxqrwtAside
Book 1
Psalm 9-10
abg
hvzk+icl





qrwtFollows the glorious ubn-adm child of humanity - a little less than God
Psalm 25abgdh
zk+iclmnsypxqrwtFollows the mi zh mlç hcbod - who is this, the king of glory?
Psalm 34abgdh
zk+iclmnsypxqrwtFollows the only psalm in book 1 without an inscription, the first mention of a new song, wiru-lo wir kdw
Psalm 37abgdhvzk+iclmns
pxqrwtFollows the first Oracle 1/2 in the psalms
Book 5
Psalm 111
abgdhvzk+iclmnsypxqrwtFollows the second Oracle 2/2 in the psalms (about Yahweh)
Psalm 112abgdhvzk+iclmnsypxqrwtFollows also the second Oracle (About a happy person who fears Yahweh)
Psalm 119abgdhvzk+iclmnsypxqrwtFollows the psalm containing bruç hba bwm ihvh, the words of the Benedictus
Psalm 145abgdhvzk+iclm
sypxqrwtFollows the less than glorious bn-anow humanity that is futility, its days as a shadow passing away.
Lamentations 1abgdhvzk+iclmnsyxpqrwt
Lamentations 2abgdhvzk+iclmnsyxpqrwt
Lamentations 3abgdhvzk+iclmnsyxpqrwt
Lamentations 4abgdhvzk+iclmnsyxpqrwt
Proverbs 31,
verses 10-31
abgdhvzk+iclmnsypxqrwt

So this kind of poetry is a known form and seems to be manipulated. Possibly there are missing verses in the psalms of book 1, or possibly the poet deliberately left some flaws. Including a great tear in Psalm 10.

But 9 of the acrostics have all the letters. And it seems that Lamentations has deliberately reversed two letters, perhaps out of sorrow. (Some music here based on the accents, Lamentations 1-4).

Psalms 145 is also complete if we look at the dead sea scrolls and the Septuagint. So I have added a reconstructed verse to my data. Significantly it lacks one affirmation of faithfulness. Note the patterns of all/every (cl).

Psalms 145 Fn Min Max Syll Avg S/N
תְּהִלָּ֗ה לְדָ֫וִ֥ד
אֲרוֹמִמְךָ֣ אֱלוֹהַ֣י הַמֶּ֑לֶךְ
וַאֲבָרֲכָ֥ה שִׁ֝מְךָ֗ לְעוֹלָ֥ם וָעֶֽד
1 A praise of David.
I will exalt you my God the king,
and I will bless your name forever and ever.
3e 4B 6
10
12
4.67
בְּכָל־י֥וֹם אֲבָרֲכֶ֑ךָּ
וַאֲהַלְלָ֥ה שִׁ֝מְךָ֗ לְעוֹלָ֥ם וָעֶֽד
2 Bless you I will in every day,
and I will praise your name forever and ever.
3e 4A 8
11
3.8
גָּ֘ד֤וֹל יְהוָ֣ה וּמְהֻלָּ֣ל מְאֹ֑ד
וְ֝לִגְדֻלָּת֗וֹ אֵ֣ין חֵֽקֶר
3 ~ Great is Yahweh and much to be praised,
and his greatness is beyond examining.
3e 4C 9
8
3.4
דּ֣וֹר לְ֭דוֹר יְשַׁבַּ֣ח מַעֲשֶׂ֑יךָ
וּגְב֖וּרֹתֶ֣יךָ יַגִּֽידוּ
4 B Down through the generations the commendation of your deeds,
and your valour will be conspicuous.

3e 4B 10
8
2.57
הֲ֭דַר כְּב֣וֹד הוֹדֶ֑ךָ
וְדִבְרֵ֖י נִפְלְאוֹתֶ֣יךָ אָשִֽׂיחָה
5 g Honour, glory, your splendour,
and the words of your wonders I ponder.
3e 4B 7
11
3
וֶעֱז֣וּז נוֹרְאֹתֶ֣יךָ יֹאמֵ֑רוּ
וּגְדוּלָּתְךָ֥ אֲסַפְּרֶֽנָּה
6 Vocal they will be of strength and your fearfulness,
and I will recount your greatness.
3e 4B 10
8
3.6
זֵ֣כֶר רַב־טוּבְךָ֣ יַבִּ֑יעוּ
וְצִדְקָתְךָ֥ יְרַנֵּֽנוּ
7 B Zealous in the memory of your abundant goodness,
they will shout aloud of your righteousness.

3e 4B 8
8
4
חַנּ֣וּן וְרַח֣וּם יְהוָ֑ה
אֶ֥רֶךְ אַ֝פַּ֗יִם וּגְדָל־חָֽסֶד
8 How gracious and compassionate is Yahweh,
slow to anger and of great kindness.
3e 4B 7
8
3
טוֹב־יְהוָ֥ה לַכֹּ֑ל
וְ֝רַחֲמָ֗יו עַל־כָּל־מַעֲשָֽׂיו
9 To all Yahweh is good,
and his compassion is over all he has made.
3e 4A 5
9
3.5
יוֹד֣וּךָ יְ֭הוָה כָּל־מַעֲשֶׂ֑יךָ
וַ֝חֲסִידֶ֗יךָ יְבָרֲכֽוּכָה
10 Yahweh, all you have made will give you thanks,
and those under your mercy will bless you.

3e 4B 10
10
4
כְּב֣וֹד מַלְכוּתְךָ֣ יֹאמֵ֑רוּ
וּגְבוּרָתְךָ֥ יְדַבֵּֽרוּ
11 Kingdom glory will be their talk,
and of your valour they will speak.
3e 4B 8
8
3.2
לְהוֹדִ֤יעַ ׀ לִבְנֵ֣י הָ֭אָדָם גְּבוּרֹתָ֑יו
וּ֝כְב֗וֹד הֲדַ֣ר מַלְכוּתֽוֹ
12 Letting his valour be known to the children of humanity,
and the glorious honour of his reign.
3e 4C 13
7
2.86
מַֽלְכוּתְךָ֗ מַלְכ֥וּת כָּל־עֹֽלָמִ֑ים
וּ֝מֶֽמְשֶׁלְתְּךָ֗ בְּכָל־דּ֥וֹר וָדֽוֹר
נְאֶמַ֗ן יְהוָ֣ה בִדְבָרָ֑יו
וְחַסִ֡יד בְּכּ֥וֹל מַעֲשָֽׂיו
13 Making your reign a reign for every era,
and your governance in all generations.

Note that faithful is Yahweh in his words,
and merciful in all his deeds.
3e 4B 9
10
8
8
3.18
סוֹמֵ֣ךְ יְ֭הוָה לְכָל־הַנֹּפְלִ֑ים
וְ֝זוֹקֵ֗ף לְכָל־הַכְּפוּפִֽים
14 Supports Yahweh all the fallen,
and he uplifts all the disturbed.
3e 4B 9
8
3.4
עֵֽינֵי־כֹ֭ל אֵלֶ֣יךָ יְשַׂבֵּ֑רוּ
וְאַתָּ֤ה נֽוֹתֵן־לָהֶ֖ם אֶת־אָכְלָ֣ם בְּעִתּֽוֹ
15 Eyes all rely on you,
and you yourself give them their food in its time.
3e 4C 10
13
2.56
פּוֹתֵ֥חַ אֶת־יָדֶ֑ךָ
וּמַשְׂבִּ֖יעַ לְכָל־חַ֣י רָצֽוֹן
16 Perfect, you open your hand,
satisfying acceptance of all that lives.
3e 4B 7
9
2.67
צַדִּ֣יק יְ֭הוָה בְּכָל־דְּרָכָ֑יו
וְ֝חָסִ֗יד בְּכָל־מַעֲשָֽׂיו
17 So righteous is Yahweh in all his ways,
and merciful in all his deeds.
3e 4B 9
8
3.4
קָר֣וֹב יְ֭הוָה לְכָל־קֹרְאָ֑יו
לְכֹ֤ל אֲשֶׁ֖ר יִקְרָאֻ֣הוּ בֶאֱמֶֽת
18 Quick is Yahweh to all calling him,
to all who call him in truth.

3e 4C 8
11
2.38
רְצוֹן־יְרֵאָ֥יו יַעֲשֶׂ֑ה
וְֽאֶת־שַׁוְעָתָ֥ם יִ֝שְׁמַ֗ע וְיוֹשִׁיעֵֽם
19 Reasoned acceptance he will make for those who fear him,
and he will hear their cry and will save them.
3e 4A 8
11
3.17
שׁוֹמֵ֣ר יְ֭הוָה אֶת־כָּל־אֹהֲבָ֑יו
וְאֵ֖ת כָּל־הָרְשָׁעִ֣ים יַשְׁמִֽיד
20 Shelters Yahweh all loving him,
and all the wicked he will exterminate.
3e 4B 9
8
2.43
תְּהִלַּ֥ת יְהוָ֗ה יְֽדַבֶּ֫ר־פִּ֥י
וִיבָרֵ֣ךְ כָּל־בָּ֭שָׂר שֵׁ֥ם קָדְשׁ֗וֹ לְעוֹלָ֥ם וָעֶֽד
21 To the praise of Yahweh my mouth will speak,
and let all flesh bless his holy name forever and ever.
3e 4B 9
14
2.88

Saturday, 24 April 2021

Lamentations 5

A related post here stimulated me to have a look at the music for this non-acrostic chapter. It is the only one of the 22-verse chapters in the 5-chapter scroll of Lamentations (1,2,4) to fail to use an atnah in any verse. Instead the zaqen-qatan marks a brief pause. It certainly has a pausal capacity, but it is not the feel of the subdominant. The subdominant is used only once in verse 56 of chapter 3, a 66 verse acrostic.


Lamentations 5 Fn Min Max Syll
זְכֹ֤ר יְהוָה֙ מֶֽה־הָ֣יָה לָ֔נוּ הַבִּ֖יטָה וּרְאֵ֥ה אֶת־חֶרְפָּתֵֽנוּ 1 Remember Yahweh how it is for us. Take note and see our reproach. 3e 4C 19
נַחֲלָתֵ֙נוּ֙ נֶֽהֶפְכָ֣ה לְזָרִ֔ים בָּתֵּ֖ינוּ לְנָכְרִֽים 2 Our inheritance is changed for strangers, our houses for aliens. 3e 4B 17
יְתוֹמִ֤ים הָיִ֙ינוּ֙ וְאֵ֣ין אָ֔ב אִמֹּתֵ֖ינוּ כְּאַלְמָנֽוֹת 3 We have become orphans and without a father, our mothers as widows. 3e 4C 17
מֵימֵ֙ינוּ֙ בְּכֶ֣סֶף שָׁתִ֔ינוּ עֵצֵ֖ינוּ בִּמְחִ֥יר יָבֹֽאוּ 4 Our water for money we imbibe. Our trees come at a price. 3e 4B 16
עַ֤ל צַוָּארֵ֙נוּ֙ נִרְדָּ֔פְנוּ יָגַ֖עְנוּ וְלֹ֥א הֽוּנַ֖ח־לָֽנוּ 5 On our necks persecution, we labour and there is no rest for us. C 3e 4C 17
מִצְרַ֙יִם֙ נָתַ֣נּוּ יָ֔ד אַשּׁ֖וּר לִשְׂבֹּ֥עַֽ לָֽחֶם 6 To Egypt we give a hand. To Ashur, to be satisfied with bread. 3e 4B 13
אֲבֹתֵ֤ינוּ חָֽטְאוּ֙ וְאֵינָ֔ם וַאֲנַ֖חְנוּ עֲוֺנֹתֵיהֶ֥ם סָבָֽלְנוּ 7 Our ancestors sinned and there is no them, but we ourselves bear the burden of their iniquities. 3e 4C 21
עֲבָדִים֙ מָ֣שְׁלוּ בָ֔נוּ פֹּרֵ֖ק אֵ֥ין מִיָּדָֽם 8 Servants govern among us. There is no one to rend from their hand. 3e 4B 13
בְּנַפְשֵׁ֙נוּ֙ נָבִ֣יא לַחְמֵ֔נוּ מִפְּנֵ֖י חֶ֥רֶב הַמִּדְבָּֽר 9 We are, ourselves, come to our bread in the face of the sword in the wilderness. 3e 4B 16
עוֹרֵ֙נוּ֙ כְּתַנּ֣וּר נִכְמָ֔רוּ מִפְּנֵ֖י זַלְעֲפ֥וֹת רָעָֽב 10 Our skin is like an oven, fevered, in the face of ferocious famine. 3e 4B 16
נָשִׁים֙ בְּצִיּ֣וֹן עִנּ֔וּ בְּתֻלֹ֖ת בְּעָרֵ֥י יְהוּדָֽה 11 They afflicted women in Zion, the virgins of the cities of Judah. 3e 4B 16
שָׂרִים֙ בְּיָדָ֣ם נִתְל֔וּ פְּנֵ֥י זְקֵנִ֖ים לֹ֥א נֶהְדָּֽרוּ 12 Nobility by their hand are hanged. The faces of the elders they do not honour. 3e 4B 16
בַּחוּרִים֙ טְח֣וֹן נָשָׂ֔אוּ וּנְעָרִ֖ים בָּעֵ֥ץ כָּשָֽׁלוּ 13 They bear youths in their prime to grind, and the lads stumble under the tree. 3e 4B 16
זְקֵנִים֙ מִשַּׁ֣עַר שָׁבָ֔תוּ בַּחוּרִ֖ים מִנְּגִינָתָֽם 14 The elders from the gate have ceased, youths in their prime, from their strings. 3e 4B 16
שָׁבַת֙ מְשׂ֣וֹשׂ לִבֵּ֔נוּ נֶהְפַּ֥ךְ לְאֵ֖בֶל מְחֹלֵֽנוּ 15 Ceased is the joy of our heart, changed to lament is our dance. 3e 4B 16
נָֽפְלָה֙ עֲטֶ֣רֶת רֹאשֵׁ֔נוּ אֽוֹי־נָ֥א לָ֖נוּ כִּ֥י חָטָֽאנוּ 16 Fallen is the crown of our head. Woe now to us because we have sinned. 3e 4B 16
עַל־זֶ֗ה הָיָ֤ה דָוֶה֙ לִבֵּ֔נוּ עַל־אֵ֖לֶּה חָשְׁכ֥וּ עֵינֵֽינוּ 17 For this our heart has become infirm for these are our darkened eyes. 3e 4C 17
עַ֤ל הַר־צִיּוֹן֙ שֶׁשָּׁמֵ֔ם שׁוּעָלִ֖ים הִלְּכוּ־בֽוֹ פ 18 On the hill of Zion is desolation. Foxes walk on it. P C 3e 4C 13
אַתָּ֤ה יְהוָה֙ לְעוֹלָ֣ם תֵּשֵׁ֔ב כִּסְאֲךָ֖ לְדֹ֥ר וָדֽוֹר 19 You, Yahweh, persist for ever, your throne from generation to generation. 3e 4C 16
לָ֤מָּה לָנֶ֙צַח֙ תִּשְׁכָּחֵ֔נוּ תַּֽעַזְבֵ֖נוּ לְאֹ֥רֶךְ יָמִֽים 20 Why in perpetuity do you forget us and forsake us for such a length of days? C 3e 4C 18
הֲשִׁיבֵ֨נוּ יְהוָ֤ה ׀ אֵלֶ֙יךָ֙ וְֽנָשׁ֔וּבָה חַדֵּ֥שׁ יָמֵ֖ינוּ כְּקֶֽדֶם 21 Turn us Yahweh, to you, and we will be turned. Make new our days as of old. 3e 4C 21
כִּ֚י אִם־מָאֹ֣ס מְאַסְתָּ֔נוּ קָצַ֥פְתָּ עָלֵ֖ינוּ עַד־מְאֹֽד ש 22 Because if to refuse, you refuse us, you are raging over us very severely. W C 3e 4C 18

Background on the acrostics of the Bible.

There are 13 acrostics in the TNK, 4 in Lamentations, one in Proverbs, and 8 in the Psalms, Psalms 9-10,25,34,37, // 111,112,119, and 145. These 8 are clear structural markers in the Psalter, each one celebrating the immediately preceding psalm, and those 7 psalms, 8, 24, 33, 36, 110, 118, 144 clearly define a word based circular structure. fingers(8,144 and some other ‘obvious’ connections) and oracle (36,110).

I have heard it suggested that the final acrostic in Proverbs is closing the circle for that book by reflecting the opening chapters on wisdom, constantly at play (chapter 8). The acrostics in the Psalms are celebratory, the last one leading directly to the final doxology. The ones in book 1 are incomplete, the ones in book 5 complete.The 4 acrostics in Lamentations consistently reverse the order of Peh and Ayin. As if the poet were saying, I too can express my sorrow even in my devotion.

Monday, 22 January 2018

Psalms 111

Slowing down? Yes to some extent. So to keep up a single post per day, I am going to intersperse a Psalm every few days. I will try to cover the Psalms related to the Revised Common Lectionary during the week.

Here then is Psalm 111, one of a doublet of Acrostics (111-112). An acrostic celebrates the Psalm that precedes it. To have two acrostics following a Psalm is celebration indeed. In Psalms 111 and 112 we have a unique celebration of Psalm 110. (The link is to my translation from 2010. At the bottom of the linked page I have appended the current version of the Psalm.)

From my post in 2010
The most delightful rendition of this acrostic is here. In my earlier translation I did not begin to attempt an acrostic since Mary Herbert Countess of Pembroke had done such a lovely job. I can't help thinking that following the astonishing Psalm 110, these next two acrostics are simply play - the same that played before the foundation of the world. 
Psalms 111 Fn Min Max Syll
הַ֥לְלוּ יָ֨הּ ׀ אוֹדֶ֣ה יְ֭הוָה בְּכָל־לֵבָ֑ב
בְּס֖וֹד יְשָׁרִ֣ים וְעֵדָֽה
1 f Hallelu Yah. I will thank Yahweh with a whole heart,
Before the council of the upright, and assembly.
3e 4B 11
8
גְּ֭דֹלִים מַעֲשֵׂ֣י יְהוָ֑ה
דְּ֝רוּשִׁ֗ים לְכָל־חֶפְצֵיהֶֽם
2 g Great are the deeds of Yahweh,
Delight of all who search them out.
3e 4B 8
8
הוֹד־וְהָדָ֥ר פָּֽעֳל֑וֹ
וְ֝צִדְקָת֗וֹ עֹמֶ֥דֶת לָעַֽד
3 Honour and splendour his work,
Verily his righteousness stands for ever.
3e 4A 7
9
זֵ֣כֶר עָ֭שָׂה לְנִפְלְאֹתָ֑יו
חַנּ֖וּן וְרַח֣וּם יְהוָֽה
4 B Zoomed in to memory makes he his wonderful works,
How gracious and compassionate is Yahweh.
3e 4B 9
7
טֶ֭רֶף נָתַ֣ן לִֽירֵאָ֑יו
יִזְכֹּ֖ר לְעוֹלָ֣ם בְּרִיתֽוֹ
5 g To those who fear him he gives prey,
Yea, he remembers forever his covenant.
3e 4B 7
8
כֹּ֣חַ מַ֭עֲשָׂיו הִגִּ֣יד לְעַמּ֑וֹ
לָתֵ֥ת לָ֝הֶ֗ם נַחֲלַ֥ת גּוֹיִֽם
6 B Known to his people is the power of his deeds,
Letting them have the heritage of the nations.
3e 4B 10
9
מַעֲשֵׂ֣י יָ֭דָיו אֱמֶ֣ת וּמִשְׁפָּ֑ט
נֶ֝אֱמָנִ֗ים כָּל־פִּקּוּדָֽיו
7 Mark the deeds of his hands: truth and judgment,
Near and faithful are all his precepts,
3e 4B 10
8
סְמוּכִ֣ים לָעַ֣ד לְעוֹלָ֑ם
עֲ֝שׂוּיִ֗ם בֶּאֱמֶ֥ת וְיָשָֽׁר
8 Supported for ever, forever,
All done in truth and upright.
3e 4B 8
9
פְּד֤וּת ׀ שָׁ֘לַ֤ח לְעַמּ֗וֹ צִוָּֽה־לְעוֹלָ֥ם בְּרִית֑וֹ
קָד֖וֹשׁ וְנוֹרָ֣א שְׁמֽוֹ
9 Purchase price he has sent to his people,
So he commands his covenant forever,
Quite holy and fearful his name.
3e 4C 15
7
רֵ֘אשִׁ֤ית חָכְמָ֨ה ׀ יִרְאַ֬ת יְהוָ֗ה שֵׂ֣כֶל ט֭וֹב לְכָל־עֹשֵׂיהֶ֑ם
תְּ֝הִלָּת֗וֹ עֹמֶ֥דֶת לָעַֽד
10 ~ Right at the beginning of wisdom is the fear of Yahweh,
Surely a good insight for all doing them,
To stand his praise for ever.
3e 4C 16
9

Friday, 22 March 2019

Tyndale House ink

This edition of TH ink has a rather fun article on Psalm 37. Peter Williams says of acrostics: "This is a feature which can aid memorisation but which is missing in translation." Let's say it is missing in most translations. It does not need to be missing.

These acrostics, as I have pointed out before, are significant pillars within the Psalter, each one celebrating the psalm that precedes it. These are four key Psalms in Book 1: psalms 8, 24, 33, and 36 in book 1 and three, 110, 118, and 144 in book 5. Psalms 8, 24, and 144 played a part in the creation program that I was just working up.

(How can 8 acrostics in 9 psalms follow and celebrate only 7 psalms?)

We have been reading with the children, Once upon an Alphabet by Oliver Jeffers, an alphabet book that tells a story about each letter and repeats that letter frequently in the story.

Ancient authors played the same children's games. Psalm 37 is one of the 8 acrostic poems in the Psalms. Hear the letter played with, resh ר = R. (Note how resh is the mirror image of lower case r. There's more than one of these letters. See Alef through the Looking Glass by Jonathan Orr-Stav.)

TH ink points out the presence and absence of resh (R) and its significance in the article on Psalms 37. It is no doubt a game with letters. And the magazine is worth a read.

Playing games? Surely the Scriptures are serious stuff, Bob? Of course they are. But can't you play games with serious stuff? Who would bother with the trivial stuff?

Oh, and by the way, the second volume of my translation, volume 1 of the series, The Hebrew Bible and its Music, The Torah, is now available as an e-book. (The first volume available was volume 6 - I recommend not starting with the beginning. Before you read the text that is locked, you need a key. So we began the series with volume 6, The Scrolls.)

It's worth a read. It's worth a study. It's worth commenting on and giving feedback. Serious it is but also fun. (Did you think G-d only wants you to be miserable?)

This is the only published Bible with its music all available. You can sing through every chapter. See the resource pages here.

This is the whole series
  1. The Torah, Genesis, Exodus, Leviticus, Numbers, Deuteronomy (released)
  2. The Former Prophets, Joshua, Judges, Samuel, Kings (March 29, 2019)
  3. The Major Prophets, Isaiah, Jeremiah, Ezekiel (April 12, 2019)
  4. The Twelve, Hosea, Joel, Amos, Obadiah, Jonah, Micah, Nahum, Habakkuk, Zephaniah, Haggai, Zechariah, Malachi (April 24, 2019)
  5. The Books of Truth, Psalms, Proverbs, Job, (May 10, 2019)
  6. The Five Scrolls, Song of Songs, Ruth, Lamentations, Qohelet, Esther (released)
  7. The Remaining Writings, Daniel, Ezra-Nehemiah, Chronicles (May 24, 2019)
  8. A Biblical Hebrew to English Concordance (June 7, 2019)
  9. A is for Abandon, An English to Biblical Hebrew Alphabet Book (June 21, 2019)

Tuesday, 14 December 2021

Lowth on Acrostics #1

I should have started my studies 60 years ago instead of whenever. The world is a product of random choices. I came across this comment almost by accident in Legaspi's dissertation on Lowth.

Lowth identifies twelve such acrostics in the Hebrew Bible, three of which are “perfectly” alphabetical, having twenty-two lines that each begin with successive letters of the Hebrew alphabet (Psalms 111 and 112; Lamentations 2), and nine in which stanzas rather than lines begin with successive letters (Psalms 25, 34, 38, 119, 145; Proverbs 31:10 –31; Lamentations 1, 3, 4). In these poems, the structural principle is evident: each unit corresponds to a Hebrew letter. More important is the observation that the units are built from discrete lines “remarkably equal to one another in length,” or from stanzas that are made up of two, three, or four lines. In either case, the compact poetic line is the essential building block. Poetic lines can vary in length, being either short or long, but within compositions, they do not vary; “the Lines have the same congruity one with another in matter and form.”

Having studied the 13 acrostics, I am intrigued by the last line and wonder just how the 'congruence' can be measured. The thirteenth, not counted by Lowth according to this treatise of Legaspi'  is the pair of Psalms 9 and 10. The 7 poems preceding the 9 acrostics in the Psalter are in a chiastic relationship to each other. 8 and 144 preceding the first and last acrostics share two contrasting versions of the human and are in chiasm with 36 and 110, the two oracles in the Psalter, preceding the last acrostic of book 1 and the first of book 5.

So how would one measure these, especially considering that every acrostic in Book 1 is flawed, and every one in Book 4 is complete. And the four in Lamentations reverse two of the letters (peh and ayin).

Here is Psalms 111 - to start with an easy one. My syllable counts are 19, 16, 16, 16, 15, 19, 18, 17, 22, 25 for a total of 183. (The software counts them and it is not perfect. You can count them from the music also.) 

It's very clear we should give due weight to the revia in the final tricola. My software does not observe this pause, but singers would as a matter of course. [It's safe to say that not all revia in prose or poetry behave so strongly.]

הַ֥לְלוּ־יָ֨הּ ׀ אוֹדֶ֣ה יְ֭הוָה בְּכָל־לֵבָ֑ב
בְּס֖וֹד יְשָׁרִ֣ים וְעֵדָֽה
1 ♪f Hallelu Yah. I will thank Yahweh with a whole heart,
Before the council of the upright, and assembly.
a hllu-ih aodh ihvh bcl-lbb
bsod iwrim vydh
11
8
hll\v ih av/dh ihvh b/cl lbb
b/svd iwr\im v/ydh
גְּ֭דֹלִים מַעֲשֵׂ֣י יְהוָ֑ה
דְּ֝רוּשִׁ֗ים לְכָל־חֶפְצֵיהֶֽם
2 ♪g Great are the deeds of Yahweh,
Delight of all who search them out.
b gdolim mywi ihvh
druwim lcl-kpxihm
8
8
gdl\im m/yw\i ihvh
drvw\im l/cl kpx\ihm
הוֹד־וְהָדָ֥ר פָּֽעֳל֑וֹ
וְ֝צִדְקָת֗וֹ עֹמֶ֥דֶת לָעַֽד
3 Honour and splendour his work,
Verily his righteousness stands for ever.
g hod-vhdr poylo
vxdqto yomdt lyd
7
9
hvd v/hdr pyl\v
v/xdq\tv ymd\t l/yd
זֵ֣כֶר עָ֭שָׂה לְנִפְלְאֹתָ֑יו
חַנּ֖וּן וְרַח֣וּם יְהוָֽה
4 ♪B Zoomed in to memory makes he his wonderful works,
How gracious and compassionate is Yahweh.
d zcr ywh lnplaotiv
knun vrkum ihvh
9
7
zcr ywh ln/pla\vtiv
knvn v/rkvm ihvh
טֶ֭רֶף נָתַ֣ן לִֽירֵאָ֑יו
יִזְכֹּ֖ר לְעוֹלָ֣ם בְּרִיתֽוֹ
5 ♪g To those who fear him he gives prey,
Yea, he remembers forever his covenant.
h 'trf ntn liraiv
izcor lyolm brito
7
8
'trp ntn l/ira\iv
i/zcr l/yvlm brit\v
כֹּ֣חַ מַ֭עֲשָׂיו הִגִּ֣יד לְעַמּ֑וֹ
לָתֵ֥ת לָ֝הֶ֗ם נַחֲלַ֥ת גּוֹיִֽם
6 ♪B Known to his people is the power of his deeds,
Letting them have the heritage of the nations.
v cok mywiv hgid lymo
ltt lhm nklt goiim
10
9
ck m/yw\iv h/gd l/ym\v
l/tt l/hm nkl\t gvi\m
מַעֲשֵׂ֣י יָ֭דָיו אֱמֶ֣ת וּמִשְׁפָּ֑ט
נֶ֝אֱמָנִ֗ים כָּל־פִּקּוּדָֽיו
7 Mark the deeds of his hands: truth and judgment,
Near and faithful are all his precepts,
z mywi idiv amt umwp't
namnim cl-piqudiv
10
8
m/yw\i id\iv amt vm/wp't
n/amn\im cl pqvd\iv
סְמוּכִ֣ים לָעַ֣ד לְעוֹלָ֑ם
עֲ֝שׂוּיִ֗ם בֶּאֱמֶ֥ת וְיָשָֽׁר
8 Supported for ever, forever,
All done in truth and upright.
k smucim lyd lyolm
ywuiim bamt viwr
8
9
smvc\im l/yd l/yvlm
yw\vim b/amt v/iwr
פְּד֤וּת ׀ שָׁ֘לַ֤ח לְעַמּ֗וֹ
צִוָּֽה־לְעוֹלָ֥ם בְּרִית֑וֹ
קָד֖וֹשׁ וְנוֹרָ֣א שְׁמֽוֹ
9 Purchase price he has sent to his people,
So he commands his covenant forever,
Quite holy and fearful his name.
't pdut wlk lymo xivvh-lyolm brito
qdow vnora wmo
15
7
pd\vt wlk l/ym\v xvh l/yvlm brit\v
qdw vnv/ra wm\v
רֵ֘אשִׁ֤ית חָכְמָ֨ה ׀ יִרְאַ֬ת יְהוָ֗ה
שֵׂ֣כֶל ט֭וֹב לְכָל־עֹשֵׂיהֶ֑ם
תְּ֝הִלָּת֗וֹ עֹמֶ֥דֶת לָעַֽד
10 ♪~ Right at the beginning of wisdom is the fear of Yahweh,
Surely a good insight for all doing them,
To stand his praise for ever.
i rawit kcmh irat ihvh wcl 'tob lcl-ywihm
thilto yomdt lyd
16
9
raw\it kcm\h ira\t ihvh wcl 'tvb l/cl ywh\m
t/hl\tv ymd\t l/yd

Psalms 111 is about Yahweh. Psalms 112 is about the the one who fears Yahweh.  
One can see how the one is the image of the other. Both these psalms reflect the glory and are a celebration of Psalms 110. This is not a hoped-for Messianic psalm, but a hoped for imitation of Yahweh by the people who know about sharing the characteristics of Yahweh. You might well ask, Does Yahweh fear Yahweh?

Psalms 112 has syllable counts of 19, 16, 16, 17, 16, 15, 17, 15, 23, 23 for a total of 177. In both poems, the dominant line length is 8 +/- 1 syllables. (My counts are likely short by 1 for hllu. I think the schwa should be an open syllable rather than closing the first syllable. One day maybe I will get around to coding that exception.)
 
הַ֥לְלוּ־יָ֨הּ ׀ אַשְׁרֵי־אִ֭ישׁ יָרֵ֣א אֶת־יְהוָ֑ה
בְּ֝מִצְוֺתָ֗יו חָפֵ֥ץ מְאֹֽד
1 ♪f Hallelu Yah. A happy person fears Yahweh.
By his commandments he has much delight.
a hllu-ih awri-aiw ira at-ihvh
bmxvotiv kpx maod
11
8
hll\v ih awr\i aiw ira at ihvh
bm/xv\tiv kpx mad
גִּבּ֣וֹר בָּ֭אָרֶץ יִהְיֶ֣ה זַרְע֑וֹ
דּ֭וֹר יְשָׁרִ֣ים יְבֹרָֽךְ
2 Grandly valiant in the earth will be his seed.
Days of the upright will be blessed.
b gibor barx ihih zryo
dor iwrim iborç
9
7
gbr b/arx i/hih zry\v
dvr iwr\im i/brc
הוֹן־וָעֹ֥שֶׁר בְּבֵית֑וֹ
וְ֝צִדְקָת֗וֹ עֹמֶ֥דֶת לָעַֽד
3 High value and riches are in his house.
Verily his righteousness stands for ever.
g hon-vyowr bbito
vxdqto yomdt lyd
7
9
hvn v/ywr b/bit\v
v/xdq\tv ymd\t l/yd
זָ֘רַ֤ח בַּחֹ֣שֶׁךְ א֭וֹר לַיְשָׁרִ֑ים
חַנּ֖וּן וְרַח֣וּם וְצַדִּֽיק
4 ♪~ Zenith-bearing in the darkness there is light to the upright.
He is gracious and compassionate and righteous.
d zrk bkowç aor liwrim
knun vrkum vxdiq
9
8
zrk b/kwc avr l/iwr\im
knvn v/rkvm v/xdiq
טֽוֹב־אִ֭ישׁ חוֹנֵ֣ן וּמַלְוֶ֑ה
יְכַלְכֵּ֖ל דְּבָרָ֣יו בְּמִשְׁפָּֽט
5 This is a good person, gracious and lending.
Yea, he will rein in his words with judgment.
h 'tob-aiw konn umlvvh
iclcl dbriv bmwp't
7
9
'tvb aiw kvnn vm/lvh
icl/cl dbr\iv bm/wp't
כִּֽי־לְעוֹלָ֥ם לֹא־יִמּ֑וֹט
לְזֵ֥כֶר ע֝וֹלָ֗ם יִהְיֶ֥ה צַדִּֽיק
6 Causing him never to be moved.
Lasting forever in memory is one who is righteous.
v ci-lyolm la-iimo't
lzcr yolm ihih xdiq
6
9
ci l/yvlm la i/mv't
l/zcr yvlm i/hih xdiq
מִשְּׁמוּעָ֣ה רָ֭עָה לֹ֣א יִירָ֑א
נָכ֥וֹן לִ֝בּ֗וֹ בָּטֻ֥חַ בַּיהוָֽה
7 Messages of evil he does not fear.
Now his heart is prepared, trusting in Yahweh.
z mwmuyh ryh la iira
ncon libo b'tuk bihvh
8
9
m/wmvy\h ry\h la i/ira
n/cvn lb\v b'tk b/ihvh
סָמ֣וּךְ לִ֭בּוֹ לֹ֣א יִירָ֑א
עַ֖ד אֲשֶׁר־יִרְאֶ֣ה בְצָרָֽיו
8 Supported is his heart, he does not fear,
Even when it is that he sees his troubles.
k smuç libo la iira
yd awr-irah bxriv
7
8
smvc lb\v la i/ira
yd awr i/rah b/xr\iv
פִּזַּ֤ר ׀ נָ֘תַ֤ן לָאֶבְיוֹנִ֗ים
צִ֭דְקָתוֹ עֹמֶ֣דֶת לָעַ֑ד
קַ֝רְנ֗וֹ תָּר֥וּם בְּכָבֽוֹד
9 Prodigal of love, he gives to the-many needy.
Standing for ever is his righteousness.
Quite full his horn, exalted in glory.
't pizr ntn labionim xdqto yomdt lyd
qrno trum bcbod
16
7
pzr ntn l/abivn\im xdq\tv ymd\t l/yd
qrn\v t/rvm b/cbd
רָ֘שָׁ֤ע יִרְאֶ֨ה ׀ וְכָעָ֗ס
שִׁנָּ֣יו יַחֲרֹ֣ק וְנָמָ֑ס
תַּאֲוַ֖ת רְשָׁעִ֣ים תֹּאבֵֽד
10 ♪~ Rebel will see and will grieve.
So will his teeth gnash and decay.
The desire of rebels will perish.
i rwy irah vcys winiv ikroq vnms
tavvt rwyim tabd
15
8
rwy i/rah v/cys wn\iv i/krq vn/ms
t/av\t rwy\im t/abd

We will come to Lamentations in the next post.

Sunday, 21 September 2014

The Present

When you have a present in front of you ready to be opened, the first thing you do with it is remove the wrapping paper. Then you take the present out of the box and remove the inner packaging. If you are an organized person, you use the box to hold the wrapping and packaging with a view to getting them into the recycling. In other words, the present is the important part that you keep, and the other stuff you throw away.

The present in front of us is the Psalms. A book containing the whole collection of these 150 poems is called a Psalter. In this case, don't throw away the box or the wrapping material. The outer wrapping and the inner packaging are both important to understanding each of the poems. And in each psalm, there is tissue paper stored with the words and phrases. Hear the rustle of the paper as you mutter the words of the psalm. Though the packaging and wrapping are not the essence of the present, they do from their shape reveal the mind of the One who is the present.

In a word, the Psalms in their sequence reveal a story. It is your story and mine. So much is shared between us in joy and sorrow. These things were written for our learning. We will move from the negative to praise, from exile to consolation. In all these things we will learn from the One who teaches humanity knowledge. These words were written to form us together into a people who know mercy.

Here is the opening negative word – listen for what is repeated: Happy the person, who does not walk in the advice of the wicked, and in the way of sinners does not stand, and in the seat of the scornful does not sit. Here is the final invitation – listen to its joy: All the breath-bearing, praise Yah. Hallelu Yah. Between these two verses, Psalm 1:1, and Psalm 150:6 you will find a complete story, creation, redemption, exile, consolation, sin, forgiveness, anger, and joy.

The Psalms, collectively known as Tehillim, or praises, are partitioned into five books. Book 1 begins with Psalm 1 and ends with Psalm 41. Book 2 begins with Psalm 42 and ends with Psalm 72. Book 3 begins with Psalm 73 and ends with Psalm 89. Books 2 and 3 contain many great laments, both personal and collective. Book four runs from Psalms 90 to 106. And so Book 5 begins at Psalm 107 and ends at Psalm 150. Each book ends with a verse of praise. Book 5 builds praise into a great crescendo. It ends with five psalms of praise following a psalm that is called a praise of David, Psalm 145.

In Books 1 and 5, there are eight special poems that are children’s games. They are alphabet poems, though they are a little more complex than A is for Apple. In Book 1, the four poems are all broken. First are Psalms 9 and 10, a single alphabetic poem but spread over two Psalms with seven missing letters. Then comes Psalm 25 (two missing letters). Then Psalm 34 (one missing letter), and finally Psalm 37 (two missing letters). Psalm 37 is named the wicked acrostic since the word for wicked occurs 14 times in that poem. In Book 5, the four acrostics are Psalms 111, 112, 119, and 145. Each of these alphabetic poems is perfect. There is no letter out of place.

You can just begin to see that this present comes in a complex box with five different compartments. The first and last compartment have these 9 poems constructed in this obvious special form of the child’s game. The second and third compartment are filled with laments over various difficulties in the history of Israel. The fourth compartment begins with a prayer of Moses and reveals a consolation and ultimate establishment of the work to be done: And let the pleasure of the Lord our God be upon us, and the deeds of our hands establish upon us, and the deeds of our hands establish. And consider the fourth verse of Psalm 106: remember me YHWH[1] in the acceptance of your people, visit me in your salvation.

But the box is yet more complex. In the first and last books, each alphabetic poem celebrates the psalm that immediately precedes it. So the first of these acrostics, Psalms 9 and 10, celebrates Psalm 8: YHWH our Lord ,how majestic your name in all the earth. Psalm 8 presents joy in the child of humanity: you make it a little less than God and with glory and honour you crown it. And in Book 5, the last of the acrostics, Psalm 145, celebrates Psalm 144. And this psalm mirrors Psalm 8 with a touch of humour. In Psalm 8, For I see your heavens, that your fingers make, moon and stars, which you have established; and In Psalm 144: Blessed is YHWH my rock, the teacher of my hands to close combat, my fingers to war. These two psalms contain the only use of the word fingers in the Psalms. Psalm 144 also presents the child of humanity, but this time with a different touch, what is this humanity that you know it, a mortal child that you devised it; humanity is like futility, its days as a shadow passing away.

Similarly, Psalm 25 celebrates Psalm 24, gates, lift up your heads, and be lifted up, doors everlasting, and the king of glory will come in. And Psalm 119 celebrates Psalm 118, Open to me the gates of righteousness. I will go into them; I will give thanks to Yah. This is the gate of YHWH. Righteous ones will go into it. Psalm 34 celebrates the first mention of the new song in Psalm 33. Psalm 37 celebrates the oracle that is Psalm 36. And Psalms 111 and 112 celebrate the only other oracle in the Psalms, Psalm 110. These sixteen Psalms are like a great set of eight pillars holding up the tent of this book of praises.

If that is part of the box that contains this present, what is the inner wrapping like? Each psalm has its own individual tissue paper, and many pairs of psalms also are packaged together. For example, if we look at repeated words, Psalm 145 has the word all repeated 17 times. It is like a drum beat in the poem. Or if we look at Psalms 1 and 2 together, we find seven key words joining these two psalms together. Psalm 2 uses five of the words in Psalm 1 in the same sequence, sit – day – gives – judge – perish. Who is seated in Psalm 2 and what is the dangerous seat in Psalm 1? What is the common time period shared between the two psalms? Who gives in Psalm 2 to whom and what is the subject of gives in Psalm 1? Who judges and what perishes? In addition, the word way is used after this sequence in Psalm 2 but before the sequence in Psalm 1. Way and happy are an overall frame for the two poems.

You can see that we cannot throw out this material. The poems are packaged with the words themselves, teaching us by means of their own patterns. When you read a psalm, look for these patterns.

That was the red tissue paper, but there is also white, green, blue, yellow and other colours of tissue paper packaging the words. What! More packaging – when do we get to the present itself? The present itself is invisible, but definitely still present. And the present will be known by presence itself, your presence to it, and its presence to you. The packaged tissue of words is exquisitely formed because the present is itself exquisite. All your senses will be needed and action too. No part can be omitted.

There are 150 starting places, some small, some large. Psalm 78 is the longest single poem at 72 verses. Psalm 119 is longer, but it can also be seen as 22 short eight-verse poems. Psalm 76:4 contains the words that are at the centre of the praises. They are a suitable hope: there he shatters the fire-brands of bow shield and sword and battle. Selah.

But let’s pick up a lesser known part of the gift, a psalm not often studied, but important because it deals with the tongue, our tongue. How well do we control what we say? Here is Psalm 52.
For the leader, An insight of David: In comes Doeg the Edomite and he makes it clear to Saul saying to him, David goes to the house of Ahimelech.
Why do you boast in evil, O valiant one? The reproof of God is all the day long.
Calamities your tongue devises, like a honed razor that acts with deceit.
You love evil over good, falsehood over a matter of righteousness. Selah.
You love to swallow up all sorts of things, tongue of deceit.
But God will overcome you in perpetuity, he will take hold of you and pluck you from your tent and root you out of the land of the living. Selah.
And the-many righteous will see and fear and they will laugh at him: So this is the valiant one who did not set up God as his strength but trusted in the abundance of his riches and strengthened himself in his own calamity.
But I am like an olive tree, green in the house of God. I trust in God’s reproof now and for ever. I will thank you forever, for you have acted and I await your name for it is good, made clear to those under your mercy.
This poem is in Book 2. Notice that it does not use the personal name of God, YHWH, but just the word for God (Elohim). Psalms 42 to 86, that is most of Books 2 and 3, use Elohim more often than YHWH. This is yet another aspect of the packaging, a set of Psalms with a differing style.

Notice the repeated words in bold in this angry psalm. David is escaping from Saul, and Doeg squeals on him. Not a nice usage of the tongue. I wondered if David as much as calls Doeg a reproof of God. But it is not so complicated. I have rendered the word for loving-kindness almost as its opposite. It is true, however, that reproof, if we listen, is also loving-kindness. There is a real standard to behaviour in the people of God. We cannot simply snitch on others just because we think the boss (in this case, the disturbed Saul) is going to reward us. Not only is it bad for us, but given that we belong to God’s people, it doesn’t do much for God’s reputation either. Notice also who makes evidence clear to whom: Doeg makes his evidence clear to Saul and God makes the goodness of his name (reputation) clear to those who are under his mercy.

Repeated commonly used words also show us a connection between Psalms 52 and Psalm 51. The word for come and go appears twice at the beginning of Psalm 51 when Nathan the prophet came to David as he had come to Bathsheva, and twice in the beginning of Psalm 52. One could say that these Psalms, being juxtaposed, recognize both David’s sin and Doeg’s sin. Both these persons are in need of correction and covenant mercy. For more on the tongue see Psalm 12, YHWH will cut off all lips divided ... tongue speaking greatness, who said with our tongue we will prevail; our lips are ours; who is Lord to us! And Psalm 15, the one who will dwell on the holy hill is one who does not slander with his tongue. The tongue is a theme throughout the Psalms. In Book 5, Psalm 120, the first of the 15 Psalms of Ascent asks YHWH for deliverance from a false tongue, and then poses a question to the tongue: what gives with you or what next with you deceitful tongue? Psalm 141 is the last of the prayers in this theme, asking YHWH to: set a guard on my mouth; preserve the gateway of my lips.

This sentence from Psalm 141 reveals another piece of the internal packaging of a psalm verse. Notice how the two parts of the verse say the same thing in different words. This is an example of a synonymous parallel. One can also have an antithetical parallel where one phrase is contrasted with another. For example in Psalm 30: for a moment is in his anger, lives are in his acceptance; in the evening weeping stops over, but of the morning, a shout of joy. The parallels may be sequential in form a-b, a-b as above or opposite  a-b, b-a. They may even contain more than two elements, such as in the first verse of Psalm 1 a three by three parallel, or the next to last verse of Psalm 3: for you strike all my enemies on the cheek, the teeth of the wicked you break. This is in the form a-b-c, c-b-a.




[1] Y-H-W-H is the personal name of the God of Israel.