In today's lesson while listening to the Selwyn evensong I noted a few issues
with translating and I thought I would explore them a little more.
Should one pay attention to words? City vs town in verse 2. KJV
and NRSV ignore the difference between city (yir) and
town (qrh). NIV and NRSV ignore the difference between
strength (KJV) and refuge. Refuge (ksh) is a totally
different word from strength (yzz). Strength in verse 4 reflects
the strong in verse 3. I think the translator should reflect the same
stem in both Hebrew and English. There are some good arguments against
concordant translation but they don't apply here.
But speaking of concordance, what is to be done with the word I have rendered
as clutch? Why did I use this word? The translations are not
confusing but explanatory. My rendering is a stumble to read. This word is
used 38 times for the name Lot. It is used only 5 times in the sense of
something that grasps and clothes you tightly. The 5 instances include two
examples of 'clutching' the face, 1 Kings 19:13, Isaiah clutched his
face in his majestic cape, and 2 Samuel 19:5, David clutches his face
(perhaps with his hands) out of sadness at the death of Absalom. In 1 Samuel
21:10, the sword of Goliath is clutched in a shawl behind the ephod. So
the word seems to signify a covering of some sort. It is all too easy to
smooth the translation out so that no one hears the uniqueness of the usage
any more. Translations typically allow this unique usage to be veiled in the
English by using various synonyms for covering, shrouding, veiling the face.
HALOT allows the synonym cover or wrap and makes no attempt to
distinguish this from other words in Hebrew which are rendered as
cover.
The following sentence has the word for a libation (spilling out) used
as a noun. JB has invented a parallel, rendering nsc as shroud and
enwrap. HALOT allows the synonym intertwine, weave and
applies it to the phrase in Proverbs 8:23, wisdom formed or
woven before earth came into being, JB has firmly set. This
seems to me to be pure invention. I am getting far afield here and my only
solution to this problem at the moment is the one below.
It seems from the next verse that this is a passage that has had an impact far
beyond the prophet's immediate concern. Verse 8 is used by Revelation 7:15-16.
Isaiah like Proverbs is talking about ultimates, one at one end of our
imaginary time line and the other at its apogee in the other imagined
direction. The problem is that the language supports the linearity of time
assumed in our culture and religious thought, something even our science
cannot define. I don't want to give up on this rare word lv't (לוט) just yet.
I also don't want to invent another synonym for nsc (נסך) that makes me lose
the sense of the libation poured out before the foundation of the
world.
It shows my bias. I think I am into a model of time that emphasizes
presence - specifically the presence of the sacrifice (spilling out)
that is in our face always in the ways we fail to treat each other with
justice, and the trouble that has us ever in its clutches, which we call
sin resulting in death. This is dealt with, removing our reproach, says
Isaiah, but how do we enter into it? How then, should we act? With the same
overwhelmingly liberal prodigality which we observe in the created order, life
in all its abundance.
So you don't understand my translation on first hearing. You can't pass over
it with smooth synonyms. But it stops you in its tracks and you say (as I did)
- what did he (I) write that for? That's why I think we should keep the bit
about Moab in the lesson (but that's yet another subject while we pursue our
economic 'realities'). The lesson omits the last three verses. Are these just
all negative verses about Moab? Moab is an intensely important neighbour of
Israel. After all, the mother of the line of David emerged from Moab. Is
Isaiah simply boasting about Israel and the hill of Zion? I think this
trivializes the prophet.
I am not going to solve these issues in a flash.
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יְהוָ֤ה אֱלֹהַי֙ אַתָּ֔ה אֲרֽוֹמִמְךָ֙ אוֹדֶ֣ה שִׁמְךָ֔ כִּ֥י עָשִׂ֖יתָ
פֶּ֑לֶא עֵצ֥וֹת מֵֽרָח֖וֹק אֱמ֥וּנָה אֹֽמֶן
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a ihvh alohii ath arommç aodh wmç ci ywit pla yxot mrkoq amunh
aomn
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1 Yahweh, my God you are, I will exalt you. I will give thanks to your
name, for you have done wonders, advice from afar, dependable
faithfulness.
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כִּ֣י שַׂ֤מְתָּ מֵעִיר֙ לַגָּ֔ל קִרְיָ֥ה בְצוּרָ֖ה לְמַפֵּלָ֑ה אַרְמ֤וֹן
זָרִים֙ מֵעִ֔יר לְעוֹלָ֖ם לֹ֥א יִבָּנֶֽה
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b ci wmt myir lgl qrih bxurh lmplh armon zrim myir lyolm la iibnh
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2 For you have rendered a city to rubble, a fortified town fallen, a
citadel to strangers from a city. Forever it will not be built.
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עַל־כֵּ֖ן יְכַבְּד֣וּךָ עַם־עָ֑ז קִרְיַ֛ת גּוֹיִ֥ם עָרִיצִ֖ים
יִירָאֽוּךָ
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g yl-cn icbduç ym-yz qrit goiim yrixim iirauç
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3 Therefore a strong people will glorify you. A town of ruthless
nations will fear you.
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כִּֽי־הָיִ֨יתָ מָע֥וֹז לַדָּ֛ל מָע֥וֹז לָאֶבְי֖וֹן בַּצַּר־ל֑וֹ מַחְסֶ֤ה
מִזֶּ֙רֶם֙ צֵ֣ל מֵחֹ֔רֶב כִּ֛י ר֥וּחַ עָרִיצִ֖ים כְּזֶ֥רֶם קִֽיר
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d ci-hiit myoz ldl myoz labion bxr-lo mksh mzrm xl mkorb ci ruk
yrixim czrm qir
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4 For you have been strength for the weak, strength for the needy in his
straits, refuge from inundation, shade from the desert, for a wind
of the ruthless is as an inundation of house walls.
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כְּחֹ֣רֶב בְּצָי֔וֹן שְׁא֥וֹן זָרִ֖ים תַּכְנִ֑יעַ חֹ֚רֶב בְּצֵ֣ל
עָ֔ב זְמִ֥יר עָֽרִיצִ֖ים יַעֲנֶֽה
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h ckorb bxion waon zrim tcniy korb bxl yb zmir yrixim iynh
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5 As desert in an arid place, the noise of strangers you will subdue. As
desert in the shade of thick cloud, the pruning of the ruthless will be
answered.
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וְעָשָׂה֩ יְהוָ֨ה צְבָא֜וֹת לְכָל־הָֽעַמִּים֙ בָּהָ֣ר הַזֶּ֔ה מִשְׁתֵּ֥ה
שְׁמָנִ֖ים מִשְׁתֵּ֣ה שְׁמָרִ֑ים שְׁמָנִים֙ מְמֻ֣חָיִ֔ם שְׁמָרִ֖ים
מְזֻקָּקִֽים
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v vywh ihvh xbaot lcl-hymim bhr hzh mwth wmnim mwth wmrim wmnim
mmukiim wmrim mzuqqim
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6 And Yahweh of hosts will make for all the peoples on this hill, a
party of stout things, a party of dregs, stout things full of
marrow, dregs purged.
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וּבִלַּע֙ בָּהָ֣ר הַזֶּ֔ה פְּנֵֽי־הַלּ֥וֹט ׀ הַלּ֖וֹט
עַל־כָּל־הָֽעַמִּ֑ים וְהַמַּסֵּכָ֥ה הַנְּסוּכָ֖ה
עַל־כָּל־הַגּוֹיִֽם
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z ubily bhr hzh pni-hlo't hlo't yl-cl-hymim vhmsch hnsuch
yl-cl-hgoiim
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7 And he will swallow up on this hill, the face of the clutch, the
clutch over all the peoples, and the spilling out, the spilling out
over all the nations.
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בִּלַּ֤ע הַמָּ֙וֶת֙ לָנֶ֔צַח וּמָחָ֨ה אֲדֹנָ֧י יְהוִ֛ה דִּמְעָ֖ה מֵעַ֣ל
כָּל־פָּנִ֑ים וְחֶרְפַּ֣ת עַמּ֗וֹ יָסִיר֙ מֵעַ֣ל כָּל־הָאָ֔רֶץ
כִּ֥י יְהוָ֖ה דִּבֵּֽר
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k bily hmvvt lnxk umkh adonii ihvh dmyh myl cl-pnim vkrpt ymo isir
myl cl-harx ci ihvh dibr
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8 He will swallow up death in perpetuity, my Lord Yahweh will wipe away
tears from every face. And the reproach of his people he will put
aside from all the earth, for Yahweh has spoken.
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וְאָמַר֙ בַּיּ֣וֹם הַה֔וּא הִנֵּ֨ה אֱלֹהֵ֥ינוּ זֶ֛ה קִוִּ֥ינוּ ל֖וֹ
וְיֽוֹשִׁיעֵ֑נוּ זֶ֤ה יְהוָה֙ קִוִּ֣ינוּ ל֔וֹ נָגִ֥ילָה
וְנִשְׂמְחָ֖ה בִּישׁוּעָתֽוֹ
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't vamr biom hhua hnh alohinu zh qivvinu lo viowiynu zh ihvh
qivvinu lo ngilh vnwmkh biwuyto
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9 And it will be said in that day, Behold this is our God. We have
waited for him, and he will save us. This is Yahweh. we have waited
for him. We will rejoice and be glad in his salvation.
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כִּֽי־תָנ֥וּחַ יַד־יְהוָ֖ה בָּהָ֣ר הַזֶּ֑ה וְנָ֤דוֹשׁ מוֹאָב֙
תַּחְתָּ֔יו כְּהִדּ֥וּשׁ מַתְבֵּ֖ן בְּמ֥וֹ מַדְמֵנָֽה
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i ci-tnuk id-ihvh bhr hzh vndow moab tktiv chduw mtbn bmo mdmnh
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10 For the hand of Yahweh will rest on this hill, and Moab will be
pounded under him as straw is pounded into compost.
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וּפֵרַ֤שׂ יָדָיו֙ בְּקִרְבּ֔וֹ כַּאֲשֶׁ֛ר יְפָרֵ֥שׂ הַשֹּׂחֶ֖ה
לִשְׂח֑וֹת וְהִשְׁפִּיל֙ גַּֽאֲוָת֔וֹ עִ֖ם אָרְבּ֥וֹת יָדָֽיו
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ia uprw idiv bqrbo cawr iprw hwokh lwkot vhwpil gavvto ym arbot
idiv
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11 And he will spread his hands within it, as the swimmer spreads to
swim, and he will humble its pomp with what is lurking in his
hands.
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וּמִבְצַ֞ר מִשְׂגַּ֣ב חוֹמֹתֶ֗יךָ הֵשַׁ֥ח הִשְׁפִּ֛יל הִגִּ֥יעַ לָאָ֖רֶץ
עַד־עָפָֽר
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ib umbxr mwgb komotiç hwk hwpil hgiy larx yd-ypr
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12 And from the enclosure of the retreat of your ramparts, he will press
down, he will abase, he will touch to the earth, even dust.
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