When it comes to concordance, what is important and why? In what follows, I explore some of the thoughts I have when reading in a foreign tongue.
I'll start with the word for
word,
thing, or
matter, דבר. I wonder how important this 'thing' is. The stem -d-b-r- occurs four times in the 69 verses of Deuteronomy 28 (a long chapter). Is it
word,
thing, or
matter, or some other gloss here (like
pestilence as in Psalm 91)?
- Word is dark and sombre sounding, serious, recalling the word of Yahweh in which the heavens were made, and in parallel the wind, breath, spirit of his mouth.
- Thing is lighter, lesser perhaps, recalling Dr. Seuss's thing1 and thing2. With green hair if I remember. I read דבר as thing in Qohelet frequently.
- Matter is material, sensible, touchable, incarnate. Strangely, I have used it rarely in Psalms, and once in Ruth 4:7. But these are all the same three-letter stem in Hebrew.
- And there is also the Hebrew homonym rendered as pestilence - and surely words can be pestilence also.
Maybe it doesn't matter? Matter! Here in Deuteronomy, it is usually Moses' plural
words that are referred to. I varied the gloss in this chapter,
things in one case and
words in two, and
pestilence where it seemed apt. (verse 21)
Yahweh will make the pestilence cling in you until he consumes you from off the ground toward which you, yourself, are coming to possess.
But hang on a minute, is it the
word of instruction which clings negatively? People might notice this - the word
sticks in your throat, as it were. Or is it an allusion to Psalm 91? Would this be important in that Psalm 91 responds to Psalm 90 and Psalm 90 is inscribed as
of Moses?
Such concordance is more important in poetry for the similar sounds. So is a treaty poetry? (No, it's a legal document). And it might be dramatic rhetoric and it might be hopeful and on other matters (words).
Here's another example. The word I have rendered
infirmity occurs
in this form only here and in Deuteronomy 7:15. Is this possibly a frame in the book? Yes, it is. This is an objective aspect of repeating words. And this is a rare root, used only half a dozen or so times in the Bible. To have it used exactly twice near the beginning of Deuteronomy and near the end marks this book as having some single intent whoever wrote it or redacted it. I am a long way from any firm conclusion on these matters. I'll be looking for more frames eventually. But where it occurs in Job, I will try and link it to Deuteronomy since Job seems to have some literary dependency on Deuteronomy.
Now I have come across
faithful in this chapter? You would recognize the Hebrew. It is
amen, אמן.
The element of surprise for me in this is
faithful applied to
defeat and
sickness. My current solution is to use a synonym for faithful like
dependable: so great and dependable defeats and evil dependable sicknesses. Then I can mimic
depend on in verse 66.
Of course it is not traditionally translated as
faithful, so such a connection is missed in other translations. REB has for example,
the LORD will strike you and your descendants with unimaginable plagues, virulent and chronic, and with lingering and severe sickness.
JB has
Yahweh will strike you down with monstrous plagues, you and your descendants, with plagues grievous and lasting, diseases pernicious and enduring.
These translations do not consider repeating words significant. (And sometimes I don't either). Both use the derived noun (מכה from נכה) as a verb (that's often necessary). Both have rendered 'faithful' with synonyms related to
time: enduring, lingering, chronic, or lasting, following the 'long continuance' of the KJV, suggesting for me words like עלם or נזח, which might also have called up words like
everlasting or
enduring, or
persistent. While the inventive translation is fine and modern in its 'dynamic equivalence', here it misses the semantic domain of faithful and misses the link with verse 66, which I haven't read yet. But it's close enough that some link might be appropriate. REB has that word in verse 66 rendered as '
security', KJV as '
assurance', JB as '
certain'. Emotionally, semantically, and legally we are all over the map with these renderings. We have to have some sort of map, perhaps not as rigid as mine currently is, but equally not so flexible that we lose an important link in the thought behind the words. For example, REB has already anticipated the detail of verse 61 (below) in verse 59, thus missing the rhetorical climax and legal catch-all.
Then in this passage in verse 61, I find the root עלה, which I have rendered in several ways,
burnt offering,
offer up,
ascend,
brought up (and bring/brought is a word that I use with various prepositions,
up for עלה,
out of for יצה, and probably some others for various Hebrew roots - one of the unavoidable compromises in my readings). What will I use here? Already in this chapter I have used
ascendancy in various guises, so I will repeat it here - including in this treaty every imaginable failure or disease whether mentioned or not.
What I read into it in this passage is that God does not even consider the possibility of failure of the words of this instruction (Torah) in the long term. Such a failure will be taken as a return to the
infirmities of Egypt, a backwards move into slavery. The words of the covenant inherit the faithfulness of the Holy One. They cannot then fail. Is this again where Paul is stretching to in Romans 9-11?
Do you see how subject you are to the whims of the translator? And imagine the arguments if there is a translation committee? (Fortunately I am too old to be considered for one of those.)
It is very hard to talk about. I hope it is useful preparation for my third run at Job. I have so many thoughts while reading, I can scarcely keep them from running into each other.