Friday, 14 May 2010

The inner circle is very strongly connected Qoh 5:17-6:02

This image shows a series of connections surrounding 5:19 (Eccl 5:20) and defining it as a centre of at least one circle. Good is connected to its opposite. All others are like to like connections.

The remaining greater circles are more tenuous than this pair. And they are connected as tenuously with other things as well. So while one may see this larger structure, it seems less obvious than I would expect without running too high a risk of imposing on the text. Click on the image below for the full diagram.  You can see that there are some connections I chose not to make, as well as connections that I made which are synonyms or antonyms.

Qoh 5:7-6:9 - is this a circular structure

I have been working through this structure and will soon have a better image - this one is a work in process :)

Ecclesiastes chapter 7, a grinch in heaven?

Heavens! A grinch - really? In the Bible?

Who says "good is vexation over laughter
for in a facial grimace the heart is pleased"!

and is not laughing himself in the heaven of heavens?

There are many one liners in this chapter - it bears a read.

The end of the chapter is a curious revelation and a curious twist. I have not fathomed it (ha ha).

טוֹב שֵׁם מִשֶּׁמֶן טוֹב
וְיוֹם הַמָּוֶת מִיּוֹם הִוָּלְדוֹ
7.1 +vob shém mishemen
+vob
vyvom hàmavet myvom hivualdvo
a good name may be compared with good oil
and the day of death with the day of its birth
Compare Song 1:3
Note what is almost a palindrome in the Hebrew
The pronoun is there in the text - Does 'it' refer to the birth of the name?
טוֹב לָלֶכֶת אֶל בֵּית אֵבֶל
מִלֶּכֶת אֶל בֵּית מִשְׁתֶּה
בַּאֲשֶׁר הוּא סוֹף כָּל הָאָדָם
וְהַחַי יִתֵּן אֶל לִבּוֹ
7.2 +vob laleket )el béyt )ébel
mileket )el béyt mishteh
bà)asher hvu) svoph kal ha)adam
vhàxày yitén )el libvo
it is good to go to a house of lament
(over going to a house of feasting)
for this is the end of every earthling
and one who lives will take it to heart
..
טוֹב כַּעַס מִשְּׂחוֹק
כִּי בְרֹעַ פָּנִים יִיטַב לֵב
7.3 +vob kà`às misxvoq
ky broà`panym yy+àb léb
good is vexation over laughter
for in a facial grimace the heart is pleased
Qohelet is the grinch
לֵב חֲכָמִים בְּבֵית אֵבֶל
וְלֵב כְּסִילִים בְּבֵית שִׂמְחָה
7.4 léb xakamym bbéyt )ébel
vléb ksylym bbéyt simxah
the heart of the shrewd is in the house of lament
and the heart of the foolish is in the house of happiness
..
טוֹב לִשְׁמֹעַ גַּעֲרַת חָכָם
מֵאִישׁ שֹׁמֵעַ שִׁיר כְּסִילִים
7.5 +vob lishmoà`gà`aràt xakam
mé)ysh shoméà`shyr ksylym
It is good to hear the rebuke of the shrewd
over one's hearing of the song of fools
..
כִּי כְקוֹל הַסִּירִים תַּחַת הַסִּיר
כֵּן שְׂחֹק הַכְּסִיל
וְגַם זֶה הָבֶל
7.6 ky kqvol hàsyrym tàxàt hàsyr
kén sxoq hàksyl
vgàm zeh habel
for as the voice of the fat in the fire
or the sizzle of the frying pan
so is the laughter of the fool
and even this is futility
I have doubled the words to get at the crackling of the thorns that is evident in the sound of the Hebrew
כִּי הָעֹשֶׁק יְהוֹלֵל חָכָם
וִיאַבֵּד אֶת לֵב מַתָּנָה
7.7 ky ha`osheq yhvolél xakam
vy)àbéd )et léb màtanah
for the exploitation maddens the shrewd
and a gift destroys a heart
..
טוֹב אַחֲרִית דָּבָר מֵרֵאשִׁיתוֹ
טוֹב אֶרֶךְ רוּחַ מִגְּבַהּ רוּחַ
7.8 +vob )àxaryt dabar méré)shytvo
+vob )erek rvuàxmigbàh rvuàx
Good is a thing's end over its beginning
good is the patient wind over the proud wind
my favorite 'thing' a.k.a word
But word is a round vowel and thing a narrow one
a heavy sound over a light one
אַל תְּבַהֵל בְּרוּחֲךָ לִכְעוֹס
כִּי כַעַס בְּחֵיק כְּסִילִים יָנוּחַ
7.9 )àl tbàhél brvuxaka lik`vos
ky kà`às bxéyq ksylym yanvuàx
Do not be rash to be vexed in your wind
for vexation reposes in the bosom of fools
wind/spirit (ruax) as elsewhere
אַל תֹּאמַר מֶה הָיָה שֶׁהַיָּמִים הָרִאשֹׁנִים הָיוּ טוֹבִים מֵאֵלֶּה
כִּי לֹא מֵחָכְמָה שָׁאַלְתָּ עַל זֶה
7.10 )àl to)màr meh hayah
shehàyamym hari)shonym hayvu +vobym mé)éleh
ky lo) méxakmah sha)àlta `àl zeh
Do not say - how is it that the days of the beginning were good over these?
for it is not from shrewdness that you pine for them
..
טוֹבָה חָכְמָה עִם נַחֲלָה
וְיֹתֵר לְרֹאֵי הַשָּׁמֶשׁ
7.11 +vobah xakmah `im nàxalah
vyotér lro)éy hàshamesh
shrewdness is good with inheritance
and is left to those that see the sun
..
כִּי בְּצֵל הַחָכְמָה
בְּצֵל הַכָּסֶף
וְיִתְרוֹן דַּעַת הַחָכְמָה
תְּחַיֶּה בְעָלֶיהָ
7.12 ky bcél hàxakmah
bcél hàkaseph
vyitrvon dà`àt hàxakmah
txàyeh b`aleyah
For in the shadow of shrewdness,
is in the shadow of silver
and what is left of knowledge is shrewdness
she keeps her husband alive
..
רְאֵה אֶת מַעֲשֵׂה הָאֱלֹהִים
כִּי מִי יוּכַל לְתַקֵּן אֵת אֲשֶׁר עִוְּתוֹ
7.13 r)éh )et mà`aséh ha)elohym
ky my yvukàl ltàqén )ét )asher `ivutvo
Look at the work of God
for who can straighten what was perverse?
cf Eccl 1:15
בְּיוֹם טוֹבָה הֱיֵה בְטוֹב
וּבְיוֹם רָעָה רְאֵה
גַּם אֶת זֶה לְעֻמַּת זֶה עָשָׂה הָאֱלֹהִים
עַל דִּבְרַת שֶׁלֹּא יִמְצָא הָאָדָם
אַחֲרָיו מְאוּמָה
7.14 byvom +vobah heyéh b+vob
vubyvom ra`ah r)éh
gàm )et zeh l`umàt zeh `asah ha)elohym
`àl dibràt shelo) yimca) ha)adam
)àxarayv m)vumah
in a day of good, be in the good
and in a day of evil - look out:
even this against that, this God has made
about things that the earthling will not find
--- after him nothing!
cf Eccl 7:18 bazeh ... mizeh
אֶת הַכֹּל רָאִיתִי בִּימֵי הֶבְלִי
יֵשׁ צַדִּיק אֹבֵד בְּצִדְקוֹ
וְיֵשׁ רָשָׁע מַאֲרִיךְ בְּרָעָתוֹ
7.15 )et hàkol ra)yty byméy hebly
yésh càdyq )obéd bcidqvo
vyésh rasha` mà)aryk bra`atvo
All these I have seen in the days of my futility
here is a righteous one destroyed in his righteousness
and here is a wicked one prolonged in his evil
..
אַל תְּהִי צַדִּיק הַרְבֵּה
וְאַל תִּתְחַכַּם יוֹתֵר
לָמָּה תִּשּׁוֹמֵם
7.16 )àl thy càdyq hàrbéh
v)àl titxàkàm yvotér lamah tishvomém
Do not be too much righteous
and do not leave yourself with to much shrewdness
why give yourself difficulty?
..
אַל תִּרְשַׁע הַרְבֵּה
וְאַל תְּהִי סָכָל
לָמָּה תָמוּת בְּלֹא עִתֶּךָ
7.17 )àl tirshà` hàrbéh
v)àl thy sakal lamah tamvut blo) `iteka
Do not be too much evil
and don't be foolish
why die when it's not your time?
..
טוֹב אֲשֶׁר תֶּאֱחֹז בָּזֶה
וְגַם מִזֶּה אַל תַּנַּח אֶת יָדֶךָ
כִּי יְרֵא אֱלֹהִים יֵצֵא אֶת כֻּלָּם
7.18 +vob )asher te)exoz bazeh
vgàm mizeh )àl tànàx )et yadeka
ky yré) )elohym yécé) )et kulam
It is good that you should seize into this
and even from that not leave your hand
for the one fearing God emerges from them all
..
הַחָכְמָה תָּעֹז לֶחָכָם
מֵעֲשָׂרָה שַׁלִּיטִים אֲשֶׁר הָיוּ בָּעִיר
7.19 hàxakmah ta`oz lexakam
mé`asarah shàly+ym )asher hayvu ba`yr
Shrewdness strengthens the shrewd
over ten masters that are in the city.
..
כִּי אָדָם אֵין צַדִּיק בָּאָרֶץ
אֲשֶׁר יַעֲשֶׂה טּוֹב וְלֹא יֶחֱטָא
7.20 ky )adam )éyn càdyq ba)arec
)asher yà`aseh +vob vlo) yex+a)
For there is no righteous earthling in the earth
that does good and does not sin
..
גַּם לְכָל הַדְּבָרִים אֲשֶׁר יְדַבֵּרוּ
אַל תִּתֵּן לִבֶּךָ
אֲשֶׁר לֹא תִשְׁמַע אֶת עַבְדְּךָ מְקַלְלֶךָ
7.21 gàm lkal hàdbarym )asher ydàbérvu
)àl titén libeka
)asher lo) tishmà` )et `àbdka mqàlleka
And of all the things that are thought
don't take them to your heart
that you not hear your servant slight you
..
כִּי גַּם פְּעָמִים רַבּוֹת יָדַע לִבֶּךָ
אֲשֶׁר גַּם אַתָּה קִלַּלְתָּ אֲחֵרִים
7.22 ky gàm p`amym ràbvot yadà` libeka
)asher gàm )t )àtah qilàlta )axérym
for even your many pulsed heart knows
that even you have slighted others
..
כָּל זֹה נִסִּיתִי בַחָכְמָה
אָמַרְתִּי אֶחְכָּמָה וְהִיא רְחוֹקָה מִמֶּנִּי
7.23 kal zoh nisyty bàxakmah
)amàrty )exkamah
vhy) rxvoqah mimeny
All this I have proved with shrewdness
I said 'I will be shrewd'
but it was far from me
..
רָחוֹק מַה שֶּׁהָיָה
וְעָמֹק עָמֹק מִי יִמְצָאֶנּוּ
7.24 raxvoq màh shehayah
v`amoq `amoq my yimca)envu
What is it that is so far?
and deep unsearchable - who will find it?
..
סַבּוֹתִי אֲנִי וְלִבִּי לָדַעַת
וְלָתוּר וּבַקֵּשׁ חָכְמָה וְחֶשְׁבּוֹן
וְלָדַעַת רֶשַׁע כֶּסֶל וְהַסִּכְלוּת הוֹלֵלוֹת
7.25 sàbvoty )any vliby ladà`àt
vlatvur vubàqésh xakmah vxshbvon
vladà`àt reshà` kesel vhàsiklvut hvolélvot
I circled, I did, and my heart, to know
and to explore and desire shrewdness and reason
and to know wickedness, folly and foolishness and madness
cf Eccl 1:17 - we are in the second half of the book
(though I did not see an exact centre in the 222 verses
(c 6:10, 11) -
and we see a number of reminders of the first chapter
as if Qohelet is starting or about to start a new section
וּמוֹצֶא אֲנִי מַר מִמָּוֶת
אֶת הָאִשָּׁה אֲשֶׁר הִיא מְצוֹדִים
וַחֲרָמִים לִבָּהּ אֲסוּרִים יָדֶיהָ
טוֹב לִפְנֵי הָאֱלֹהִים יִמָּלֵט מִמֶּנָּה
וְחוֹטֵא יִלָּכֶד בָּהּ
7.26 vumvoce) )any màr mimavet
)et ha)ishah )asher hy) mcvodym
vàxaramym libah )asvurym yadeyah
+vob lipnéy ha)elohym yimalé+ mimenah
vxvo+é) yilaked bah
and I found, I did, more bitter than death
the woman,
that she of nets
and destructions her heart,
bonds her hands
good in the presence of God is escape from her
but the sinner is captured by her
The only way for me to identify
with this cultural imposition
is to see the 'obvious' as in Job 31:
if my heart is enticed by a woman
and at the opening of my friend I take advantage
let my wife grind for another
and over her let others bow
רְאֵה זֶה מָצָאתִי אָמְרָה קֹהֶלֶת
אַחַת לְאַחַת לִמְצֹא חֶשְׁבּוֹן
7.27 r)éh zeh maca)ty )amrah
qohelet
)àxàt l)àxàt limco) xshbvon
You see this I have found, she said,
Qohelet (that is)
one by one to find out reason
Aha - Qohelet herself has found this, one by one.
Perhaps shrewdness is not so far
that she must climb up to heaven to bring it down.
אֲשֶׁר עוֹד בִּקְשָׁה נַפְשִׁי וְלֹא מָצָאתִי
אָדָם אֶחָד מֵאֶלֶף מָצָאתִי
וְאִשָּׁה בְכָל אֵלֶּה לֹא מָצָאתִי
7.28 )asher `vod biqshah nàpshy vlo) maca)ty
)adam )exad mé)eleph maca)ty
v)ishah bkal )éleh lo) maca)ty
that yet my being desires and I have not found
an earthling one of a thousand I have found
and a woman among all these I have not found
Seow considers the last line a scribal 'enhancement'.
Pity. If this be projection, it is not missing today either.
It is not above a man to blame the woman for his own weakness.
But shrewdness should let a man discover
his own heart and not impute the cause to another.
לְבַד רְאֵה זֶה מָצָאתִי
אֲשֶׁר עָשָׂה הָאֱלֹהִים אֶת הָאָדָם יָשָׁר
וְהֵמָּה בִקְשׁוּ חִשְּׁבֹנוֹת רַבִּים
7.29 lbàd r)éh zeh maca)ty
)asher `asah ha)elohym )et ha)adam yashar
vhémah biqshvu xishbonvot ràbym
alone, see, this I have found
that this God has made the earthling upright
but they have desired many devices
work vs make? עָשָׂה Make, work, do etc is frequent in Eccl ( c 60 times this sound will occur). It is also used in English as a sound in the causative. There is both sonority missing and in the passive nature of 'make' also some possible lost effect as to the cost of making, doing or working.

Translating Qohelet 10:1

Here is a verse I am stumped on - The AV is a creative attempt.

Dead flies cause the ointment of the apothecary to send forth a stinking savour: [so doth] a little folly him that is in reputation for wisdom [and] honour.

A dead fly makes a stink in a bowl of perfumer's oil
from shrewdness, from glory - a little foolishness


Seow suggests the missing bowl. The second half is reversed order with ellipsis. The surrounding proverbs help a bit - but did the writer not want to admit the trouble with folly? Qohelet sought it out after all.

Thoughts?

Thursday, 13 May 2010

Data for graph showing possibility of automation of the inclusio


Here are all the words in the sequence from Qohelet 5:7 (Hebrew) to 6:9. I should have included the English but... Now is there a circular pattern? Unfortunately it is not very clear from this experiment. Every word has been coloured after a unique fashion - 1234 times its gematria interpreted as a hex code!

The image is from a search on perplexity. Do at least scroll to the bottom to see the central message - quite encouraging actually.

I have arranged the verses as if in a circle - so right hand column is section by section read from the bottom up.

So 5:19 (Hebrew) is the centre. Now (see this post) if I were to eliminate the insignificant, the significant might show up. (Curious that in the reader all the columns are reversed!)

CountRoot(?)VerseText
6
אם
5.07אִם עֹשֶׁק רָשׁ וְגֵזֶל מִשְׁפָּט וָצֶדֶק תִּרְאֶה בַמְּדִינָה
אַל תִּתְמַהּ עַל הַחֵפֶץ
כִּי גָבֹהַּ מֵעַל גָּבֹהַּ שֹׁמֵר
וּגְבֹהִים עֲלֵיהֶם
1
עשׁק


1
רשׁ


1
גזל


1
שׁפט


1
צדק


3
ראה


1
דין


3
אל


1
תמה


3
על


1
חפץ


8
כי


3
גבה


1
מעל


3
גבה


2
שׁמר


3
גבה


3
על


1
רון
5.08וְיִתְרוֹן אֶרֶץ בַּכֹּל היא
מֶלֶךְ לְשָׂדֶה נֶעֱבָד
1
ארץ


7
כל


3
יא


1
מלך


1
לשׂד


2
עבד


2
אהב
5.09אֹהֵב כֶּסֶף לֹא יִשְׂבַּע כֶּסֶף
וּמִי אֹהֵב בֶּהָמוֹן לֹא תְבוּאָה
גַּם זֶה הָבֶל
2
כסף


11
לא


3
שׂבע


2
כסף


3
ום


2
אהב


1
בהם


11
לא


1
בוא


8
גם


5
זה


4
הבל


4
רב
5.10בִּרְבוֹת הַטּוֹבָה
רַבּוּ אוֹכְלֶיהָ
וּמַה כִּשְׁרוֹן לִבְעָלֶיהָ
כִּי אִם רְאוּת עֵינָיו
7
טוב


4
רב


6
אכל


3
ום


1
כשׁר


2
בעל


8
כי


6
אם


5
רא


2
עין


1
מתק
5.11מְתוּקָה שְׁנַת הָעֹבֵד
אִם מְעַט וְאִם הַרְבֵּה יֹאכֵל
וְהַשָּׂבָע לֶעָשִׁיר
אֵינֶנּוּ מַנִּיחַ לוֹ לִישׁוֹן
4
שׁן


2
עבד


6
אם


1
מעט


6
אם


4
רבה


6
אכל


3
שׂבע


5
עשׁר


3
אין


1
נח


6
לו


1
שׁון


---compare 5:7-11 to 6:7-9---
2
ישׁ
5.12יֵשׁ רָעָה חוֹלָה רָאִיתִי תַּחַת הַשָּׁמֶשׁ
עֹשֶׁר שָׁמוּר לִבְעָלָיו לְרָעָתוֹ
3
רעה


2
חול


5
רא


3
תחת


4
שׁמשׁ


5
עשׁר


2
שׁמר


2
בעל


4
רע


1
אבד
5.13וְאָבַד הָעֹשֶׁר הַהוּא
בְּעִנְיַן רָע
וְהוֹלִיד בֵּן
וְאֵין בְּיָדוֹ מְאוּמָה
5
עשׁר


1
הה


1
ענן


4
רע


2
ולד


1
בן


3
אין


2
ביד


1
אום


8
אשׁר
5.14כַּאֲשֶׁר יָצָא מִבֶּטֶן אִמּוֹ
עָרוֹם יָשׁוּב
לָלֶכֶת כְּשֶׁבָּא
וּמְאוּמָה לֹא יִשָּׂא בַעֲמָלוֹ
שֶׁיֹּלֵךְ בְּיָדוֹ
1
יצא


1
בטן


6
אם


1
ערם


1
שׁוב


1
לך


2
שׁבא


1
מאם


11
לא


1
נשׂא


4
עמל


1
שׁיל


2
ביד


8
גם
5.15וְגַם זֹה רָעָה חוֹלָה
כָּל עֻמַּת שֶׁבָּא כֵּן יֵלֵךְ
וּמַה יִּתְרוֹן לוֹ שֶׁיַּעֲמֹל לָרוּחַ
5
זה


3
רעה


2
חול


7
כל


1
עם


2
שׁבא


1
כן


2
ילך


3
ום


2
יתר


6
לו


2
שׁע


2
רוח


8
גם
5.16גַּם כָּל יָמָיו בַּחֹשֶׁךְ יֹאכֵל
וְכָעַס הַרְבֵּה וְחָלְיוֹ וָקָצֶף
7
כל


1
מי


3
חשׁך


6
אכל


1
כעס


4
רבה


2
חל


1
קצף


---Compare 5:12-16 to 6:3-6---
1
הנה
5.17הִנֵּה אֲשֶׁר רָאִיתִי אָנִי
טוֹב אֲשֶׁר יָפֶה
לֶאֱכוֹל וְלִשְׁתּוֹת
וְלִרְאוֹת טוֹבָה בְּכָל עֲמָלוֹ שֶׁיַּעֲמֹל
תַּחַת הַשֶּׁמֶשׁ
מִסְפַּר יְמֵי חַיָּו
אֲשֶׁר נָתַן לוֹ הָאֱלֹהִים
כִּי הוּא חֶלְקוֹ
8
אשׁר


5
רא


1
אני


7
טוב


8
אשׁר


1
יפה


1
לאך


1
לשׁ


5
רא


7
טוב


7
כל


4
עמל


2
שׁע


3
תחת


4
שׁמשׁ


1
ספר


3
ים


1
חיו


8
אשׁר


3
נתן


6
לו


6
אלה


8
כי


2
וא


2
חלק


8
גם
5.18גַּם כָּל הָאָדָם
אֲשֶׁר נָתַן לוֹ הָאֱלֹהִים
עֹשֶׁר וּנְכָסִים
וְהִשְׁלִיטוֹ לֶאֱכֹל מִמֶּנּוּ
וְלָשֵׂאת אֶת חֶלְקוֹ
וְלִשְׂמֹחַ בַּעֲמָלוֹ
זֹה מַתַּת אֱלֹהִים הִיא
7
כל


3
אדם


8
אשׁר


3
נתן


6
לו


6
אלה


5
עשׁר


2
נכס


2
שׁלט


6
אכל


5
מן


1
שׂא


2
את


2
חלק


2
שׂח


4
עמל


5
זה


1
מת


6
אלה


3
יא


---Compare 5:17-18 to 6:1-2 leaving 5:19
as the middle - and therefore the message ---
For it will not much remember the days of its life
for this God answers in the happiness of its heart
8
כי
5.19כִּי לֹא הַרְבֵּה יִזְכֹּר אֶת יְמֵי חַיָּיו
כִּי הָאֱלֹהִים מַעֲנֶה בְּשִׂמְחַת לִבּוֹ
11
לא


4
רבה


1
זכר


2
את


3
ים


1
חי


8
כי


6
אלה


1
ענה


2
שׂח


1
לב


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7
כל
6.07כָּל עֲמַל הָאָדָם לְפִיהוּ
וְגַם הַנֶּפֶשׁ לֹא תִמָּלֵא
4
עמל


3
אדם


1
לף


8
גם


4
נפשׁ


11
לא


1
מלא


8
כי
6.08כִּי מַה יּוֹתֵר לֶחָכָם מִן הַכְּסִיל
מַה לֶּעָנִי יוֹדֵעַ לַהֲלֹךְ נֶגֶד הַחַיִּים
2
מה


2
יתר


1
חכם


5
מן


1
כסל


2
מה


1
לען


2
ידע


1
הלך


1
נגד


1
הח


7
טוב
6.09טוֹב מַרְאֵה עֵינַיִם
מֵהֲלָךְ נָפֶשׁ
גַּם זֶה הֶבֶל וּרְעוּת רוּחַ
1
מרא


2
עין


1
מהל


4
נפשׁ


8
גם


5
זה


4
הבל


4
רע


2
רוח



















































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6
אם
6.03אִם יוֹלִיד אִישׁ מֵאָה וְשָׁנִים רַבּוֹת יִחְיֶה
וְרַב שֶׁיִּהְיוּ יְמֵי שָׁנָיו
וְנַפְשׁוֹ לֹא תִשְׂבַּע מִן הַטּוֹבָה
וְגַם קְבוּרָה לֹא הָיְתָה לּוֹ
אָמַרְתִּי טוֹב מִמֶּנּוּ הַנָּפֶל
2
ולד


3
אישׁ


1
מא


4
שׁן


4
רב


2
חיה


4
רב


1
שׁיה


3
ים


4
שׁן


4
נפשׁ


11
לא


3
שׂבע


5
מן


7
טוב


8
גם


1
קבר


11
לא


1
ית


6
לו


1
אמר


7
טוב


5
מן


1
נפל


8
כי
6.04כִּי בַהֶבֶל בָּא וּבַחֹשֶׁךְ יֵלֵךְ
וּבַחֹשֶׁךְ שְׁמוֹ יְכֻסֶּה
4
הבל


1
בא


3
חשׁך


2
ילך


3
חשׁך


1
שׁם


1
כסה


8
גם
6.05גַּם שֶׁמֶשׁ לֹא רָאָה
וְלֹא יָדָע נַחַת לָזֶה מִזֶּה
4
שׁמשׁ


11
לא


3
ראה


11
לא


2
ידע


1
נחת


1
לז


1
מזה


3
אל
6.06וְאִלּוּ חָיָה אֶלֶף שָׁנִים פַּעֲמַיִם
וְטוֹבָה לֹא רָאָה
הֲלֹא אֶל מָקוֹם אֶחָד הַכֹּל הוֹלֵךְ
2
חיה


1
אלף


4
שׁן


1
פעם


7
טוב


11
לא


3
ראה


1
הלא


3
אל


1
קום


1
אחד


1
הכל


1
ול




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2
ישׁ
6.01יֵשׁ רָעָה אֲשֶׁר רָאִיתִי
תַּחַת הַשָּׁמֶשׁ
וְרַבָּה הִיא עַל הָאָדָם
3
רעה


8
אשׁר


5
רא


3
תחת


4
שׁמשׁ


4
רבה


3
יא


3
על


3
אדם


3
אישׁ
6.02אִישׁ אֲשֶׁר יִתֶּן לוֹ הָאֱלֹהִים
עֹשֶׁר וּנְכָסִים וְכָבוֹד
וְאֵינֶנּוּ חָסֵר לְנַפְשׁוֹ
מִכֹּל אֲשֶׁר יִתְאַוֶּה
וְלֹא יַשְׁלִיטֶנּוּ הָאֱלֹהִים לֶאֱכֹל מִמֶּנּוּ
כִּי אִישׁ נָכְרִי יֹאכְלֶנּוּ
זֶה הֶבֶל וָחֳלִי רָע הוּא
8
אשׁר


3
נתן


6
לו


6
אלה


5
עשׁר


2
נכס


1
כבד


3
אין


1
חסר


4
נפשׁ


7
כל


8
אשׁר


1
תאו


11
לא


2
שׁלט


6
אלה


6
אכל


5
מן


8
כי


3
אישׁ


1
נכר


6
אכל


5
זה


4
הבל


2
חל


4
רע


2
וא


Wednesday, 12 May 2010

Visualizing structure

The thing about structure is you wonder if it really is deliberate. I have been graphing the section of Qohelet from Hebrew verse 5:7 to 6:9. It won't yield to automation just yet. There are 304 words in the section which repeat or not. The repeating roots are shown in this image. Which are significant to the argument? I should just sit down and map them one by one, but I am looking for an algorithmic way to prep a diagram and show the original text to allow seeing of the argument. Just glancing down the x axis - some of these words are characteristic of the argument, some are grammatical and may be characteristic of the author's style, and some may be structurally significant. If I drew the diagram, I would impose my meaning onto it - and that can be useful - but was it an accident?

I have drawn lots of diagrams - see the colourful portrait of the psalms always at the link on the right. With manual drawing, I would not have pointed out particles like lo and ki and gam or asher or col or lo - to him, unless they were unusual. But in this case, tov, shamash, havel, I would point out. (I am just reading the graph x axis from right to left.)  By the way - my root derivation algorithm is only about 90% accurate. It has no logic for assimilated root letters.

Ecclesiastes chapter 6


Qohelet 6 is a very short chapter. Seow outlines a circular structure from 5:8 (Hebrew 5:7) to 6:9. Perhaps I will diagram it more fully in a future life. I think the problems of showing it in text make the shape unconvincing. But that is for later.

In the meanwhile, here is his / her main complaint - that the earthling that is greedy and fearful even if it lives 1000 years and has 100 children is not better than a stillborn. Reminds me of JB's instruction to the soldiers - be satisfied with your wages.

Even after the rant, we return to the same result - no knowledge of the future and again the implication of the same end for all.


יֵשׁ רָעָה אֲשֶׁר רָאִיתִי
תַּחַת הַשָּׁמֶשׁ
וְרַבָּה הִיא עַל הָאָדָם
6.1 yésh ra`ah )asher ra)yty
tàxàt hàshamesh
vràbah hy) `àl ha)adam
Here is an evil which I have seen
--- under the sun
and frequent it is with the earthling
..
אִישׁ אֲשֶׁר יִתֶּן לוֹ הָאֱלֹהִים
עֹשֶׁר וּנְכָסִים וְכָבוֹד
וְאֵינֶנּוּ חָסֵר לְנַפְשׁוֹ
מִכֹּל אֲשֶׁר יִתְאַוֶּה
וְלֹא יַשְׁלִיטֶנּוּ הָאֱלֹהִים לֶאֱכֹל מִמֶּנּוּ
כִּי אִישׁ נָכְרִי יֹאכְלֶנּוּ
זֶה הֶבֶל וָחֳלִי רָע הוּא
6.2 )ysh )asher yiten lvo ha)elohym
`osher vunkasym vkabvod
v)éynenvu xasér lnàpshvo
mikol )asher yit)àvueh
vlo) yàshly+envu ha)elohym le)ekol mimenvu
ky )ysh nakry yo)klenvu
zeh hebel vaxaly ra` hvu)
a human such that to him this God has given
riches and wealth and glory
so it has nothing lacking in its life
from all that it desires
and this God does not give it power to eat of them
for an alien human eats them
This is futility and it is an evil sickness
I was tempted to neuter this human, but refused twice

re glory - kbod is always glory to me - says Humpty Dumpty
אִם יוֹלִיד אִישׁ מֵאָה וְשָׁנִים רַבּוֹת יִחְיֶה
וְרַב שֶׁיִּהְיוּ יְמֵי שָׁנָיו
וְנַפְשׁוֹ לֹא תִשְׂבַּע מִן הַטּוֹבָה
וְגַם קְבוּרָה לֹא הָיְתָה לּוֹ
אָמַרְתִּי טוֹב מִמֶּנּוּ הַנָּפֶל
6.3 )im yvolyd )ysh mé)ah vshanym ràbvot yixyeh
vràb sheyihyvu yméy shanayv
vnàpshvo lo) tisbà` min hà+vobah
vgàm qbvurah lo) haytah lvo
)amàrty +vob mimenvu hànapel
if a human birth a hundred and live many years
and many there be of the days of iys years
and its being is not satisfied from this good
then even a burial is not for it
I say the miscarriage is good compared to it
Seow - a burial plot
כִּי בַהֶבֶל בָּא וּבַחֹשֶׁךְ יֵלֵךְ
וּבַחֹשֶׁךְ שְׁמוֹ יְכֻסֶּה
6.4 ky bàhebel ba) vubàxoshek yélék
vubàxoshek shmvo ykuseh
for in futility it comes and in darkness it goes
and in darkness its name is covered
I left the neuter here as with earthling for the most part.
While odd, it slows down the thinking while reading.
גַּם שֶׁמֶשׁ לֹא רָאָה
וְלֹא יָדָע נַחַת לָזֶה מִזֶּה
6.5 gàm shemesh lo) ra)ah
vlo) yada`
nàxàt lazeh mizeh
Even sun it has not seen
and it has no knowledge
There is quietness for this one over the other
Following Seow in the line break
know is used intransitively in this case
וְאִלּוּ חָיָה אֶלֶף שָׁנִים פַּעֲמַיִם
וְטוֹבָה לֹא רָאָה
הֲלֹא אֶל מָקוֹם אֶחָד הַכֹּל הוֹלֵךְ
6.6 v)ilvu xayah )eleph shanym pà`amàyim
v+vobah lo) ra)ah
halo) )el maqvom )exad hàkol hvolék
and to the other there be a thousand pulsing years
but no good has it seen?
Is it not to one place that all go?
Now we are back to the human - read he or she
כָּל עֲמַל הָאָדָם לְפִיהוּ
וְגַם הַנֶּפֶשׁ לֹא תִמָּלֵא
6.7 kal `amàl ha)adam lpyhvu
vgàm hànepesh lo) timalé)
all the toil of that earthling is in its mouth
and even that being is not satisfied
One could be more physical with nephesh -
but one could also consider that 'being' is physical as well
I find myself not wanting to emphasize the eating metaphor
כִּי מַה יּוֹתֵר לֶחָכָם מִן הַכְּסִיל
מַה לֶּעָנִי יוֹדֵעַ לַהֲלֹךְ נֶגֶד הַחַיִּים
6.8 ky màh yvotér lexakam min hàksyl màh le`any yvodéà` làhalok neged hàxàyymFor what is left to the shrewd over the fool?
What for the afflicted, knowing how to walk in front of the living?
..
טוֹב מַרְאֵה עֵינַיִם
מֵהֲלָךְ נָפֶשׁ
גַּם זֶה הֶבֶל וּרְעוּת רוּחַ
6.9 +vob màr)éh `éynàyim
méhalak napesh
gàm zeh hebel vur`vut rvuàx
Good are eyes seeing
over a walk of such a being.
Even this is futility and a tending of wind
..
מַה שֶּׁהָיָה כְּבָר נִקְרָא שְׁמוֹ
וְנוֹדָע אֲשֶׁר הוּא אָדָם
וְלֹא יוּכַל לָדִין עִם שֶׁתַּקִּיף מִמֶּנּוּ
6.10 màh shehayah kbar niqra) shmvo
vnvoda` )asher hvu) )adam
vlo) yvukàl ladyn `im shetàqyph mimenvu
What is it that is? Already it is called its name.
And it is known that it is an earthling
And it cannot judge with one who prevails against it.
..
כִּי יֵשׁ דְּבָרִים הַרְבֵּה
מַרְבִּים הָבֶל
מַה יֹּתֵר לָאָדָם
6.11 ky yésh dbarym hàrbéh
màrbym habel
màh yotér la)adam
For there are multiple things
that multiply futility.
What is left to the earthling?
..
כִּי מִי יוֹדֵעַ מַה טּוֹב לָאָדָם בַּחַיִּים
מִסְפַּר יְמֵי חַיֵּי הֶבְלוֹ
וְיַעֲשֵׂם כַּצֵּל
אֲשֶׁר מִי יַגִּיד לָאָדָם
מַה יִּהְיֶה אַחֲרָיו
תַּחַת הַשָּׁמֶשׁ
6.12 ky my yvodéà`màh +vob la)adam bàxàyym
mispàr yméy xàyéy heblvo
vyà`asém kàcél
)asher my yàgyd la)adam màh yihyeh )àxarayv
tàxàt hàshamesh
For who knows what is good for the earthling
in these lives?
in the tale of the days of the lives of its futility?
And he makes them as a shadow
but who will relate to the earthing what has become after it
--- under the sun?
The 'he' is ambiguous as to antecedent
See Psalm 144:4, 102:11, 109:23
I suppose in the vagueness of my sieve-like memory,
I could see shadow as of my own making.
If so, read 'it' for 'he'